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Youngben88
Joined: 19 Jul 2013
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Posted: Tue Jan 28, 2014 10:10 am Post subject: Helios, Itaewon arrest |
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Anyone remember a big police bust here in late 2007, around October? |
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maitaidads
Joined: 08 Oct 2012
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Posted: Tue Jan 28, 2014 5:29 pm Post subject: |
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Yep- some of the Nigerians I used to buy from were targeted. |
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Youngben88
Joined: 19 Jul 2013
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Posted: Tue Jan 28, 2014 9:48 pm Post subject: |
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I meant in the club in Helios |
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guavashake
Joined: 09 Nov 2013
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Posted: Tue Jan 28, 2014 10:28 pm Post subject: |
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IIRC, the story reported is that a group of individuals from a country with a reputation for advanced drinking skills verbally protested at closing time and demanded further alcoholic beverages.
They were kicked out and beat down with sticks/clubs, or something like that.
Is that what you are referring to? |
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Joe Boxer
Joined: 25 Dec 2007 Location: Bundang, South Korea
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Posted: Tue Jan 28, 2014 10:48 pm Post subject: |
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guavashake wrote: |
IIRC, the story reported is that a group of individuals from a country with a reputation for advanced drinking skills verbally protested at closing time and demanded further alcoholic beverages.
They were kicked out and beat down with sticks/clubs, or something like that.
Is that what you are referring to? |
As I recall, Helio's owner called a gang of Korean thugs to come and intervene, and one thug shot a patron in the head with a "gas gun", whatever that is. |
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CentralCali
Joined: 17 May 2007
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Posted: Tue Jan 28, 2014 11:20 pm Post subject: |
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A "gas gun" is simply a pellet gun which uses compressed gas to eject the pellet. |
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young_clinton
Joined: 09 Sep 2009
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Posted: Tue Jan 28, 2014 11:32 pm Post subject: |
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guavashake wrote: |
IIRC, the story reported is that a group of individuals from a country with a reputation for advanced drinking skills |
Would that be Britain? |
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Youngben88
Joined: 19 Jul 2013
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Posted: Wed Jan 29, 2014 5:36 am Post subject: |
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I was on about an incident involving me.
I slapped the ass of a girl I was talking with.
My buddy and I left, but I returned to the scene to be arrested.
Lots of people in the club jumped on me. |
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Youngben88
Joined: 19 Jul 2013
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Posted: Wed Jan 29, 2014 5:37 am Post subject: |
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Later I had to pay two million. |
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Stain
Joined: 08 Jan 2014
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Posted: Wed Jan 29, 2014 6:06 am Post subject: |
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Ok it's good that your story has a beginning, middle, and end, which is clearly defined. However, in this story there's no meat (detail). No suspense to draw the reader in. Beef it up a little and I think you might have something worth submitting. |
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Youngben88
Joined: 19 Jul 2013
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Posted: Wed Jan 29, 2014 6:12 am Post subject: |
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It is true so I am just laying down the facts.
I have asked before about the severity of a two million won fine and people assumed I was messing about. |
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Stain
Joined: 08 Jan 2014
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Posted: Wed Jan 29, 2014 6:58 am Post subject: |
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Yes, but even non-fiction needs those essential storytelling elements. The real truth itself requires embellishment to a certain degree to make it interesting. That's why history is so interesting. |
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young_clinton
Joined: 09 Sep 2009
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Posted: Wed Jan 29, 2014 7:20 am Post subject: |
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Youngben88 wrote: |
It is true so I am just laying down the facts.
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Yah Yah that's the exact same thing you are saying in your other posting that's on this forum. |
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Youngben88
Joined: 19 Jul 2013
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Posted: Wed Jan 29, 2014 7:36 am Post subject: |
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Yes and it is annoying that it is not believed. |
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Stain
Joined: 08 Jan 2014
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Posted: Wed Jan 29, 2014 8:11 am Post subject: |
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Youngben88 wrote: |
Yes and it is annoying that it is not believed. |
Suspension of disbelief is required. |
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