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hiromichi
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Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2015 2:09 pm Post subject: Even if, but |
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Is "but" below unnecessary?
Richard began by explaining that everything takes time. Well, duh! I knew that. Even if you're falling into the event horizon of the gigantic black hole in the center of our galaxy, you appear to freeze forever, but from your point of view, time keeps ticking. _________________ Hiromichi |
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lotus
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Posted: Mon Sep 21, 2015 12:18 pm Post subject: |
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Yes, you need the "but" because you are changing the point of view from someone looking at you as you fall into the black hole, to your own point of view as you fall into the black hole.
--lotus _________________ War does not make one great --Yoda |
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hiromichi
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Posted: Mon Sep 21, 2015 1:09 pm Post subject: |
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lotus: Thank you. I gave up. It is too figurative. _________________ Hiromichi |
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hiromichi
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Posted: Mon Sep 21, 2015 1:20 pm Post subject: |
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lotus:
Let me try again. Why does one freeze in this case? And what is "freeze" here? _________________ Hiromichi |
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lotus
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Posted: Mon Sep 21, 2015 3:35 pm Post subject: |
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It's a very common figurative phrase, "frozen in time." It means that time has stood still -- just like in movies where people just stop where they are when time stands still. At that moment, time is frozen.
The theory behind the sentence has been proven to be true. When you are falling into a black hole, you are approaching the speed of light. According to Einstein, as you go near the speed of light, time slows down for you from an observer's point of view. But, from your point of view, time is going normal. That's why when you go to the next star say, and come back, the person who sent you off looks older than you. This theory has been validated with an experiment with two atomic clocks. One stays on earth, the other goes around the earth several times at high speed. When the two clocks see other again, the speeding clock shows a slower time (less time has elapsed) than the clock on earth. To the speeding clock, the clock on earth looks older.
Now, think of the experiment with twin brothers. When the traveling brother comes back, the non-traveling brother will look older. In real life, this happens. It's just that the change in time is so small, we don't notice it.
--lotus _________________ War does not make one great --Yoda |
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hiromichi
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Posted: Mon Sep 21, 2015 4:45 pm Post subject: |
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Eureka、the theory of relativity.
Then second question. "Even if" should be simply "If". Am I right? _________________ Hiromichi |
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lotus
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Posted: Mon Sep 21, 2015 10:53 pm Post subject: |
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Richard is saying everything takes time, including yourself as you go into a black hole -- even though others might see you as frozen in time.
You don't need to use the word "even".
I would edit the passage like so:
Richard began by explaining that everything takes time. Well, duh! I knew that. Suppose you are falling into the event horizon of the gigantic black hole in the center of our galaxy. You might appear to be frozen in time forever. But from your point of view, time is still normal and the clock is still ticking.
--lotus _________________ War does not make one great --Yoda |
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hiromichi
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Posted: Tue Sep 22, 2015 3:47 am Post subject: |
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lotus:
Thank you very much for your follow-up. _________________ Hiromichi |
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SimpleEnglishBlogger
Joined: 01 Feb 2011 Posts: 50 Location: Japan
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Posted: Fri Dec 18, 2015 7:03 am Post subject: |
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Sorry, I disagree. If you change the "even if", you're really taking away from the author's emotions.
The author is using "even if" to indicate that the following is one where, perhaps surprisingly to the reader, is ALSO a case where "things take time".
Note the difference between the following utterances:
My phone's battery dies quickly. Even if I only use it to check my emails, it dies within a couple of hours.
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My phone's battery dies quickly. If I only use it to check my emails, it dies within a couple of hours.
Only using your phone to check emails should take very little power. With your phone off the rest of the time, the battery should drain slowly, not in a few hours. But the scenario is used to show that it doesn't only die under normal use, it dies quickly in situations where it shouldn't, which is a bit surprising. _________________ Visit www.sloweasyenglish.com for material to help you with your listening skills!
All of the videos are in SLOW and EASY ENGLISH so they are easy to understand and will help you improve your listening until you can watch regular movies and TV! |
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hiromichi
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Posted: Fri Dec 18, 2015 2:53 pm Post subject: |
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SimpleEnglishBlogger:
Thank you very much for your followup.
I would be very happy if you tell me what case is implicitly assumed in comparison in my exakmple. I don't know much about Einstein’s theory, though. _________________ Hiromichi |
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SimpleEnglishBlogger
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Posted: Fri Dec 18, 2015 7:51 pm Post subject: |
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The author is using an extreme example, which compares it to "everything" (everything takes time). _________________ Visit www.sloweasyenglish.com for material to help you with your listening skills!
All of the videos are in SLOW and EASY ENGLISH so they are easy to understand and will help you improve your listening until you can watch regular movies and TV! |
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hiromichi
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Posted: Fri Dec 18, 2015 8:31 pm Post subject: |
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SimpleEnglishBlogger:
Now that I got it fully. Thank you very much for your explanation which makes English easier to understand. _________________ Hiromichi |
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SimpleEnglishBlogger
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Posted: Sun Dec 20, 2015 8:29 am Post subject: |
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You're quite welcome! _________________ Visit www.sloweasyenglish.com for material to help you with your listening skills!
All of the videos are in SLOW and EASY ENGLISH so they are easy to understand and will help you improve your listening until you can watch regular movies and TV! |
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