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muni
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 Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2003 8:07 am Post subject: please correct |
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please correct this paragraph
"daer friend
how are you, hope yuo are enjoying your stay at home, when are you coming back I am missing you so much, do write to me, I have wasted onre week with out studing a word, any ways I have 4 more weeks to go ,take care" |
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Corey
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| Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2003 12:12 pm Post subject: |
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I hope this isn't homework for a class you're taking....
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BakaGaijin
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| Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2003 12:33 pm Post subject: |
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Well, aside from three spelling mistakes and no period at the end of the last sentence, I don't see any mistakes.
"daer friend
how are you, hope yuo are enjoying your stay at home, when are you coming back I am missing you so much, do write to me, I have wasted onre week with out studing a word, any ways I have 4 more weeks to go ,take care"
It should look like this;
Dear Friend,
How are you? Hope you are enjoying your stay at home. When are you coming back? I miss you so much! Please write to me. I have wasted one week without studing a word. Anyway, I have four more weeks to go. Take care.
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Corey
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| Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2003 1:12 pm Post subject: |
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| BakaGaijin wrote: |
Well, aside from three spelling mistakes and no period at the end of the last sentence, I don't see any mistakes.
"daer friend
how are you, hope yuo are enjoying your stay at home, when are you coming back I am missing you so much, do write to me, I have wasted onre week with out studing a word, any ways I have 4 more weeks to go ,take care"
It should look like this;
Dear Friend,
How are you? Hope you are enjoying your stay at home. When are you coming back? I miss you so much! Please write to me. I have wasted one week without studing a word. Anyway, I have four more weeks to go. Take care. |
"...without studying..." 
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BakaGaijin
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| Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2003 2:15 pm Post subject: |
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Oops. Even native speakers can mess up sometimes.
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BG
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bud
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| Posted: Thu Nov 06, 2003 8:23 am Post subject: |
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Hi Corey & Baka,
Muni posts in here from time to time. As her/his English is at a very high level, she/he doesn't strike me as a student looking for a shortcut.
Just my two cents. |
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muni
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| Posted: Thu Nov 06, 2003 9:49 am Post subject: |
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hi!
you are very right  |
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