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Didah
Joined: 25 Jul 2009 Posts: 88 Location: Planet Tralfamador.... and so it goes
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Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2014 2:52 am Post subject: Chinese Kids Write the Darndest Things Lesson Plan |
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...Or should I say the jinpingiest things.
The following article appeared in the Washington Post about a nine-year-old boy who wrote a letter to Uncle Xi about the Chinese space program and his concerns about the president's weight and health. The letter was not sent. Instead, the boy's father posted it on a social media site and it went viral. The chicom government censors scrubbed the content. No word on how many years the father and son got for "criticizing" their dear leader. I saw the story on the Kindle version of the Washington Post which I am sure Bezos is getting ready to ask for money for receiving that rag.
Anyway, not to disappoint, there is a lesson plan. I have given my students a copy of the article and asked them if they have heard about this. None of them had read or heard about this -- what a surprise. I used this as a jumping off point to discuss the broader issues of censorship. Not surprisingly, some Chinese students actually see positive benefits from censorship. I do tread lightly because after all this is China. Kind of reminds me of a no-so-funny joke from the 1970s in which one of the differences between the U.S. and PRC pointed out that in American schools, students participate in show and tell while in Chinese schools the students have show N lie (play on words).
I will keep you posted if my door is kicked in and I join the father and son in a re-education program in some undisclosed remote location.
http://www.washingtonpost.com/blogs/worldviews/wp/2014/12/18/not-as-skinny-as-obama-like-putin-is-ok-china-censors-schoolboys-suggestion-that-xi-lose-weight/ |
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asiannationmc
Joined: 13 Aug 2014 Posts: 1342
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Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2014 5:33 am Post subject: |
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http://languagelog.ldc.upenn.edu/nll/?p=16495
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A current cause célèbre in China concerns a letter that was supposedly written by a little boy to the President of China, Xi Jinping:
"‘Not as skinny as Obama, like Putin is okay.’ China censors schoolboy’s suggestion that Xi lose weight" (12/18/14)
"A 9-year-old told China’s president to lose some weight—and censors shut him down" (12/18/14)
Here's the letter, first in Romanization, then in characters, and after that in translation:
PINYIN
Nín hǎo!
Wǒ shì Hénán shěng Zhèngzhōu shì de yī míng xiǎoxuéshēng. Jīntiān wǒ shì xiǎng gēn nín shuōshuō tàikōng de shì. Dàjiā dōu shuō tàikōng shì wèilái de tiǎozhàn chǎngsuǒ, wǒ yě zhème rènwéi. Yuèqiú díquè yǒu fēngfù de kuàngwùzhí, kě yuèqiú bìng méiyǒu dàqìcéng yǔ shuǐ, bìng bù shìhé rénlèi shēngcún. Cǐ tiāndì bùyí jiǔliú, Zhōngguó hángtiān gāi zhuǎn fāngxiàng le.
Wǒmen zàilái kàn Huǒxīng, tā jì yǒu dàqì yòu yǒu bīngchuān, shìgè bù yǎ yú dìqiú de hǎo dìfāng. Měiguó yǔ Èluósī yǐhòu bù zài yòng Éluósī, Měiguó gòngtóng dǎzào de guójì kōngjiānzhàn, quánmiàn cèhuà shàng Huǒxīng, lián Ouméng hé Yìndù dōu lái còu rènào, zán Zhōngguó yě kuài diǎn dòngshǒu ba!
Hǎole, wǒmen gāi tán diǎn qīngsōng de huàtí, Xí dàdà, nín kěyǐ jiǎnjiǎnféile, bùyòng xiàng Àobāmǎ nàme shòu, xiàng Pǔjīn yīyàng jiù kěyǐ!
Jìng zhù
shēntǐ jiànkāng
Niú Zīrú
ORIGINAL LETTER
敬爱的习近平爷爷:
您好!
我是河南省郑州市的一名小学生。今天我是想跟您说说太空的事。大家都说太空是未来的挑战场所,我也这么认为。月球的确有丰富的矿物质,可月球并没有大气层与水,并不适合人类生存。此天地不宜久留,中国航天该转方向了。
我们再来看火星,它既有大气又有冰川,是个不亚于地球的好地方。美国与俄罗斯以后不再用俄罗斯、美国共同打造的国际空间站,全面策划上火星,连欧盟和印度都来凑热闹,咱中国也快点动手吧!
好了,我们该谈点轻松的话题,习大大,您可以减减肥了,不用像奥巴马那么瘦,像普金一样就可以!:)
敬祝
身体健康
牛孜儒
TRANSLATION
Dear Grandpa Xi Jinping,
Greetings! I’m a pupil from Zhengzhou, Henan Province. Today I want to say a few things to you about space. Everyone believes the next big challenge is space. I think so too. The moon, for sure has rich minerals, but it doesn’t have air and water and is definitely not suitable for human life. This is not a good place for a long stay. It’s time for China’s aerospace program to change directions.
Let’s have a look at Mars. It has both air and glaciers, so it is not inferior to Earth. Eventually, the United States and Russia will no longer use the international space station and they will land on Mars. Even the European Union and India will join in the fun. Let’s hurry up!
Okay, we should include some lighter topics. Xi Dada, you could lose some weight. You don’t have to look as slim as Obama. It’s all right to look like Putin!
Best regards,
Wishing you good health
Niu Ziru
Dec. 12
After reading only two or three sentences, I became suspicious. It just didn't sound like something a nine-year-old boy would write. He dives right in to international space policy, about which he is unusually well informed. His diction is too polished and formal — including some classicisms, his characters and sentences extraordinarily well constructed. Furthermore, near the end he abruptly becomes very cheeky, presumptuously addressing the president in the first person plural inclusive, discourteously calling him Xí dàdà 习大大 ("Xi Bigbig" or "Big Daddy Xi" [apparently dàdà 习大大 means "father" in Shaanxi and Shanxi provinces]), and comparing Xi's body weight unfavorably to that of Obama and Putin.
This letter contrasts starkly with another child's diary entry concerning President Xi that circulated widely on the Chinese internet before it too was erased by the censors:
"A child's substitution of Pinyin (Romanization) for characters" (11/9/14)
Written by a little girl a few months shy of eight years, it presents a completely different picture. She begins by saying that she wanted to invite Xi to McDonald's and describes his appearance and manner ("He's too shy!"). Furthermore, the little girl is unable to write many characters for words that she knows how to say, and substitutes Pinyin in their place. This is much more what would be expected of a child who is still in elementary school.
To check my own reaction to the little boy's supposed letter, I asked several graduate students from China what their reaction to it was. Rebecca Fu's analysis is typical:
This is a well-written letter, too well-written for a 9-year old boy — no grammatical mistakes, no wrongly written characters (either phonetic or orthographic), perfect transition words and sentences, accurate selections of adverbs and verbs, perfect collocations, well-organized structure, etc….
This manuscript is definitely not improvised. It cannot be the first draft. No omissions, no deletions, and no corrections, right?
Unrealistic for a 9-year old child!
Whether the letter was written by a nine-year-old boy or not, the question of its being censored by the authorities is another matter altogether, one that I shall not go into here on Language Log.
Incidentally, the bit where the little boy suggests that "Daddy Xi" lose a few pounds reminds me of a NYT reader comment on the music video, "'Xi Dada Loves Peng Mama': "If he really loved her, he would go on a diet" |
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asiannationmc
Joined: 13 Aug 2014 Posts: 1342
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Didah
Joined: 25 Jul 2009 Posts: 88 Location: Planet Tralfamador.... and so it goes
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Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2014 7:10 am Post subject: |
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Asiannationmc,
You found some interesting information about the article. I read with interest the comments and the posts on the U Penn site. I also read the news article. When I first read the boy's letter, I had my doubts that it was totally written by a nine-year-old boy. I am teaching in an AP bridge program in China and many of my high school students can't write that well. |
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asiannationmc
Joined: 13 Aug 2014 Posts: 1342
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Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2014 8:03 am Post subject: |
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I still think it is a good lesson as to the validity of censorship. For example, was his letter censored due to the fact that it was "faked" or due to the fact that it proclaimed that Xi was a bit overweight. Also, it brings up the validity of press information as to the reasons behind wiping something off of social media. A better example is the ban on puns, due to a song written about Daddy Xi and his wife. Several posters noticed the humor in the Chinese characters for Da + Ma and proclaimed this to be the first DaMa administration, which alludes to the use of "da Chronic" The song was called ”Daddy Xi loves Mama Peng“ The characters “da is 大+“ma 媽 |
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dongbei united
Joined: 28 Feb 2014 Posts: 47
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Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2014 11:33 am Post subject: |
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Anyway, not to disappoint, there is a lesson plan. I have given my students a copy of the article and asked them if they have heard about this. |
Good way to get yourself fired. |
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Bud Powell
Joined: 11 Jul 2013 Posts: 1736
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Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2014 12:28 pm Post subject: |
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I used this as a jumping off point to discuss the broader issues of censorship.
Why? What's your agenda? |
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spiral78

Joined: 05 Apr 2004 Posts: 11534 Location: On a Short Leash
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Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2014 1:12 pm Post subject: |
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Agree with Bud's question.
Unless the OP was hired and is paid to promote western values among his EFL students, this seems totally out of bounds.
In most cases, the job description is something along the lines of 'promote English language development' rather than 'stir up controversial ideas.' |
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rogerwilco
Joined: 10 Jun 2010 Posts: 1549
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Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2014 1:31 pm Post subject: |
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I agree with the others.
We are here to teach English, not to teach about censorship.
I would not blame your students and their parents for being annoyed, or even angry, about your "lesson plan". |
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Didah
Joined: 25 Jul 2009 Posts: 88 Location: Planet Tralfamador.... and so it goes
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Posted: Tue Dec 23, 2014 7:36 am Post subject: |
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Hi Bud,
Nice to hear from you. I haven't posted much lately.
Greetings All,
Wow, I never expected the reaction that I got from people to my initial post about the censorship article. I agree that we are here to teach English, however, unless I was teaching pure grammar or vocabulary in a vacuum, I don't see how culture, history or politics can be avoided. In fact their is a theory about how language and culture are intertwined. I teach in a bridge program that is affiliated with a Chinese high school that is affiliated with a Chinese university. There is a lot of oversight. Yet, I am able to teach the AP Language and Composition course as well as AP Literature using syllabi that are approved by the College Board. Approved texts include novels such as "Animal Farm" and "The Grapes of Wrath." We even read Orwell's "Politics and the English Language." I am able to teach "Animal Farm" with its anti totalitarian message instead of teaching it as a fable about talking barnyard animals. Since "The Gettysburg Address" is also in the curriculum, I supplement the text with a wonderful column by William Saffire (who also wrote about language in the Sunday New York Times Magazine) as well as "The Declaration of Independence" since it is referenced in Lincoln's speech. We even discuss the concept that the people are the source of the government.
As for my point, it is just another opportunity to my students to employ critical thinking skills and a jumping off place for a writing prompt.
On the whole, I have good relations with the students and parents. I am in no danger of getting fired here for having these types of discussions. I didn't come here to change the world or their political system. That is all up to them. My students are very well aware about the world around them. In fact, it was one of my students who recommended that I get a VPN when I mentioned that I was having problems with my internet.
Thank you for your responses. |
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Non Sequitur
Joined: 23 May 2010 Posts: 4724 Location: China
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Posted: Tue Dec 23, 2014 9:38 am Post subject: |
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Didah wrote: |
Hi Bud,
Nice to hear from you. I haven't posted much lately.
Greetings All,
Wow, I never expected the reaction that I got from people to my initial post about the censorship article. I agree that we are here to teach English, however, unless I was teaching pure grammar or vocabulary in a vacuum, I don't see how culture, history or politics can be avoided. In fact their is a theory about how language and culture are intertwined. I teach in a bridge program that is affiliated with a Chinese high school that is affiliated with a Chinese university. There is a lot of oversight. Yet, I am able to teach the AP Language and Composition course as well as AP Literature using syllabi that are approved by the College Board. Approved texts include novels such as "Animal Farm" and "The Grapes of Wrath." We even read Orwell's "Politics and the English Language." I am able to teach "Animal Farm" with its anti totalitarian message instead of teaching it as a fable about talking barnyard animals. Since "The Gettysburg Address" is also in the curriculum, I supplement the text with a wonderful column by William Saffire (who also wrote about language in the Sunday New York Times Magazine) as well as "The Declaration of Independence" since it is referenced in Lincoln's speech. We even discuss the concept that the people are the source of the government.
As for my point, it is just another opportunity to my students to employ critical thinking skills and a jumping off place for a writing prompt.
On the whole, I have good relations with the students and parents. I am in no danger of getting fired here for having these types of discussions. I didn't come here to change the world or their political system. That is all up to them. My students are very well aware about the world around them. In fact, it was one of my students who recommended that I get a VPN when I mentioned that I was having problems with my internet.
Thank you for your responses. |
Maybe this background could have been mentioned in the OP? |
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spiral78

Joined: 05 Apr 2004 Posts: 11534 Location: On a Short Leash
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Posted: Tue Dec 23, 2014 2:50 pm Post subject: |
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The OP seems to teach in a non-standard environment, and his/her lesson plan wouldn't be appropriate for many teachers, I think. So I agree with NS that the context should have been described initially.
I agree that we are here to teach English, however, unless I was teaching pure grammar or vocabulary in a vacuum, I don't see how culture, history or politics can be avoided. In fact their is a theory about how language and culture are intertwined.
Yes, I'm very familiar with Hofsteede and his wider legacy of culture/language studies. 'Their' is more than a theory.
However, it's entirely possible to teach the language without deliberately getting into controversial topics including culture, history, politics, law, and personal choices. A newbie following this thread might well get him/herself into trouble. |
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Non Sequitur
Joined: 23 May 2010 Posts: 4724 Location: China
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Posted: Tue Dec 23, 2014 5:58 pm Post subject: |
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There is a risk of over thinking our task.
The students I've taught, by and large, see English as a bit of code to be learned to achieve success.
'Success' is Chinese success - money, position.
It's not 'Now I am a citizen of the world accessing the glories of Western Culture, through the medium of English'. |
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Didah
Joined: 25 Jul 2009 Posts: 88 Location: Planet Tralfamador.... and so it goes
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Posted: Wed Dec 24, 2014 5:28 am Post subject: |
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While we are over thinking, I agree, many people learn English as a tool to get ahead. I don't know where the citizen of the world stuff comes from. That is not what I was talking about.
After all, it was just an article that in many ways I found humorous whether it was written by a nine-year-old boy or not. I guess that will teach me to share.
Happy Holidays |
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Non Sequitur
Joined: 23 May 2010 Posts: 4724 Location: China
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Posted: Wed Dec 24, 2014 6:46 am Post subject: |
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Take your point Didah.
But some Oral English teachers feel that they are there to teach a message and not just a skill.
One US teacher I taught alongside in 2004 insisted in showing Thelma and Louise to her classes. I presume as a bit of feminist outreach.
These kids were 19 and 20 and at least 3 years behind their Western counterparts.
Completely out of place IMHO.
Happy holiday season to all posters. |
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