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seklarwia
Joined: 20 Jan 2009 Posts: 1546 Location: Monkey onsen, Nagano
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Posted: Wed Feb 22, 2012 12:50 pm Post subject: |
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| Particularly for entry-level jobs, where you may not even be asked for a cover letter, it sets a friendlier tone. |
Sorry, again, but IMO every application deserves a cover letter! |
But many entry level jobs with big employers require that you apply via their online application form full of boxes with character limits that does not allow you to include a cover letter.
For applications that require you to send a resume, cover letters should be included.
But for online apps you should give the info requested and nothing more. |
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aynnej
Joined: 03 May 2008 Posts: 53 Location: Pittsburgh, PA, U.S.A.
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Posted: Wed Feb 22, 2012 3:20 pm Post subject: |
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| I agree with everything that's been said here. Just one more thing to add, most entry-level teaching jobs here will require you to teach children. Rapport with children is every bit as important (more so for most employers, I'd say) as a linguistic background. If your resume sounds like you're a scary tech-head or business man, you're going to have a tough time getting an interview. Likewise, if you use too much jargon during the interview (especially if you're interviewing with a Japanese person who isn't likely to understand technical vocabulary), you're not going to get the job. One of the important skills for teaching EFL is grading your language. If you can't grade your language enough to speak with an educated adult Japanese person, they're going to assume you can't grade your language enough to speak with a not-yet-educated Japanese six year old. |
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ssjup81
Joined: 15 Jun 2009 Posts: 664 Location: Adachi-ku, Tokyo, Japan
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Posted: Wed Feb 22, 2012 6:56 pm Post subject: |
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In all honesty, I've only had to really do cover letters for Japanese applications. I've rarely ever had to do that for jobs I've applied to here in the states. Seems references carry more weight or something.
To the OP, I had the same problem somewhat. I was finding it a tad bit difficult finding much of anything. I was rejected by JET too, even though I had tutoring experience, experience working ESL students, and experience working with children. Who knows why they rejected me. Could've been my SoP or something because I didn't even get to the interview process. I only tried out for JET once. I kept applying to different jobs, and finally got one with Heart English School in 2010. I came back after my contract ended in 2011 since the BoE for the area I was in, dropped Heart and went with JET and I had a death in the family, so I wasn't really concentrating on finding another one.
Anywho, I have different CVs and different resumes. Like for my one where I was interested in business work, I only listed jobs and experience that actually had something to do with the job I was seeking in question. For anything involving school or education related jobs, I'd only list on the resume jobs and experience I had that could actually apply or was relevant to the position I was applying for. I worked at SunTrust Mortgage for two years (before being laid off) processing mortgage loan applications. When seeking employment to work as an ALT or any education related job, I didn't even put it on there. Also, while at SunTrust, I worked for a Japanese translating company part time. I was doing data entry for that. I included this, but dressed it up a bit to show that I had cultural experience with Japanese clients who would come to the office. I also took lessons through this company.
I think your resume is impressive, but a bit difficult to follow since I was always told that your resume is supposed to be simple. I guess a summary of what you can do.
For your schools, that's way too much. I only posted things relevant to the position or anything education related in my bullets. For my community college, I included that I was a member of the SVEA (Student Virginia Education Association) and secretary of the Future Teachers Club. For one of my jobs, albeit a short-termed one, I mentioned that I was recognized for Teacher Appreciation Week.
I guess it's like others have said. Just dumb it down a bit and use simpler English, especially if there is that possibility that the person who will read your resume may not have English as a first language. |
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timothypfox
Joined: 20 Feb 2008 Posts: 492
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Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2012 1:42 am Post subject: |
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Ok I'm commenting again. I want to make sure you are really with "the program" as far as best practices in job applications are concerned.
If you are emailing someone your resume, your resume should not be in the body of the e-mail, but should be included as an attachment (word document format - no other format).
The body of your e-mail in most cases is your cover letter. You will have to get a feel for this to find the proper length. Just remember you are writing to people, but also remember your letter represents your professional enquiry about a position.
Do your homework and google "sample cover letters" or "sample resumes".
Some employers may ask for a Japanese style resume. Don't be afraid to ask an employer to clarify although you can google what this involves as well.
The standard US (UK) style resume should initially be a 1 pager.
I've had reasonable success with my resume written in this format:
TIMOTHY P. FOX
address
Phone: (xxx) xxx-xxxx � E-mail: [email protected]
SUMMARY OF QUALIFICATIONS: (one sentence)
AREA OF CERTIFICATION:
TEACHING EXPERIENCE:
EDUCATION:
AWARDS:
Good luck! |
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OneJoelFifty
Joined: 06 Oct 2009 Posts: 463
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Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2012 6:44 am Post subject: |
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| Some people might disagree but I think a brief personal statement at the top of the page is a good idea. |
I'm one who disagrees, Joel. Sorry. That kind of info is what I'd expect to see in a cover letter. Save the space on a resume. That's my opinion.
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| Particularly for entry-level jobs, where you may not even be asked for a cover letter, it sets a friendlier tone. |
Sorry, again, but IMO every application deserves a cover letter! |
I'll bow to your experience on this one! But as I have space on my CV I don't see any harm in it. I have my doubts as to whether the companies simply requesting that you send through your CV on the adverts and getting hundreds of applicants will read all the emails they get. |
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Glenski

Joined: 15 Jan 2003 Posts: 12844 Location: Hokkaido, JAPAN
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Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2012 9:49 am Post subject: |
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| Don't forget that some employers scan resumes for keywords, so they may actually want some of them in email bodies. No special formatting is required then. |
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Randomlyhopeless
Joined: 13 Feb 2012 Posts: 2
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Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2012 8:02 pm Post subject: |
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Much appreciation here posters! Thank you all for you input and time! This is some really great advice you've all given me.
Some quick points and thoughts (in no particular order):
a) I have multiple C/V's and Resumes, I posted the most "formal" and "academic" of them because you are all (I'm assuming) native English speakers. This one looks funky/cluttered because the spacing didn't cross over from MS Word. Less bullet points, understood! Rephrasing! Thank you!
b) I have a cover letter that is fairly form-based/prepackaged that I tailor for every application. If it's a really good job opening I will rewrite large portions to align with the company's statement/mission (listed on their website typically).
c) I've only ever been contacted by native English speakers, I'm beginning to see why thanks to all of your help and advice.
d) When I apply by email everything is sent by attachment in .pdf, labeled, and has duplicate simple text copies included in the email below my cover letter just in case there are file extension issues, attachment issues, etc.. Attachments are listed in the email with the standard "attached please find:" form.
e) As for the typical US resume coming across as bragging and hubris in the eyes of the Japanese, I ran this by two professors who had worked in Japan and their advice was that it was an "exaggeration" and "not really an issue." Further, I asked a Japanese friend who was born and raised in Yokohama and she said it's not a big deal and is expected from US nationals. With all of your input I will readdress this hahaha. Thank you!
f) Buzzwords, EXACTLY! Those are deliberate for the reason someone mentioned: most prospective employers scan resumes quickly. (My apologies I forgot whose name). I'll tone it down though, clearly I'm at 11 and have nowhere else to go from there.
g) "Dumbing down." Yeah... I ran into this problem my entire college career with writing, all the way up to--and including--my senior thesis I used words that stumped professors. I have a habit of USING that really expensive education I paid for . I suffer from prolixity, it's true. It doesn't come across any genre of my speech though. Thank you all for reminding me I can easily be a pretentious windbag when I write. Time to go reread Twain's rules of writing and his dissemination of "Cooper's Prose Style."
h) I'm awesome at interviews. I'm awesome at public speaking. I'm engaging, personable and incredibly entertaining. Don't roll your eyes at me! Ok, do roll your eyes, it's fine . Seriously though, oratory master here. Trust me when I say, it's not that I come across stodgy or boring. I can weave relevant anecdotes that exemplify points I'm making with ease. I understand I really sound pompous here, but it's true. I'll forgive you for not believing me. We can still be friends!
i) I don't apply to jobs that require the teaching of children for reasons other people mentioned.
j) Pictures I include are: An upper body shot of me standing in front of white background wearing a Cambridge style shirt and a tie (tied with a proper full Windsor). Hair did. All presentable like. Further pictures are two of me with previous classes I've taught (formal attire, students all smiling, beautiful winter day, you can almost smell the fresh snow and hear the geese honking as they glide by overhead). And my casual pictures (two) are of me standing next to my motorcycle overlooking a prominent river-valley in my state (great roads). I'm in jeans, boots, leather jacket, holding my helmet.
k) Man this list has become big, is anyone even reading now that I've begun to ramble?
Again though, it means a lot to me that you all responded and I'm grateful. I have a hard time asking people for help and when i receive it, it means the world to me.
Thank you all! |
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seklarwia
Joined: 20 Jan 2009 Posts: 1546 Location: Monkey onsen, Nagano
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Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2012 9:08 pm Post subject: |
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| i) I don't apply to jobs that require the teaching of children for reasons mentioned. |
Umm... there aren't that many entry level jobs that don't require the teaching of children. You applied for JET; that's teaching only children! (Unless you applied for the CIR position, in which case you haven't said anything that tells us that you have a high enough level of Japanese for that).
If you are applying for jobs teaching adults only, there is a chance that you are applying for things that are no longer entry level and that you are thusly not qualified for by typical Japanese standards.
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| Further, I asked a Japanese friend who was born and raised in Yokohama and she said it's not a big deal and is expected from US nationals. |
I hope she isn't one of these people who goes back to Japan and finds themself outcast because they can't readjust to a society that they now find oppressive because their experience outside of Japan... but I digress.
Unless she has Japanese ESL experience, chances are she isn't somebody to rely on for advice of this nature. Another problem is that she has probably been out of Japan too long and lost some of her Japanese mentality. Most Japanese people have never been abroad and know very little about anything outside Japan. I mean it still shocks me that most Japanese people don't realise that the reason many of us can use chopsticks is because we do have them in our countries and many people would have probably have tried (if only for a laugh) to eat with them at a Chinese restaurant, etc. Don't assume that people here know what to expect from different nationalities and...
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Glenski

Joined: 15 Jan 2003 Posts: 12844 Location: Hokkaido, JAPAN
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Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2012 10:06 pm Post subject: |
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| Randomlyhopeless wrote: |
| a) I have multiple C/V's and Resumes, I posted the most "formal" and "academic" of them because you are all (I'm assuming) native English speakers. This one looks funky/cluttered because the spacing didn't cross over from MS Word. Less bullet points, understood! Rephrasing! Thank you! |
Actually, I took into account the fact that it was just pasted onto a forum text window. My reason for saying it looked cluttered was that it contains far too much unnecessary information, and the "pertinent" sections at the top are a waste of space, IMO. Pare them down at best and transfer the bulk of it to the cover letter.
Moreover, you list:
Over a year and a half of Academic experience in ESL classrooms for International Refugees in to following roles:
o As Observer and Assistant in ESL classrooms.
o As Assistant, Stand-in Teacher and Tutor to ESL students.
o As ESL Teacher and Tutor.
yet you don't have a single entry for schools or companies where you were employed for these experiences. Looks very strange. The first "pertinent" group looks like just a list of classes you took, anyway. Leave them out, IMO.
Buzzwords are nice, especially for scanning, but who really scans for words like "adroit"? Some of your language in the resume leaves a lot to the imagination (a "modicum of Japanese"?). Plus, a lot of it is more directed at business executives, not language teaching operations, and quite frankly none of your previous non-teaching work experience really counts much here.
Final recommendation: Leave off the names and contact info of references. You don't want them to get letters from employers that you have not discussed the job details with, do you? |
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pnksweater
Joined: 24 Mar 2005 Posts: 173 Location: Tokyo, Japan
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Posted: Fri Feb 24, 2012 12:16 am Post subject: |
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| Randomlyhopeless wrote: |
j) Pictures I include are: An upper body shot of me standing in front of white background wearing a Cambridge style shirt and a tie (tied with a proper full Windsor). Hair did. All presentable like. Further pictures are two of me with previous classes I've taught (formal attire, students all smiling, beautiful winter day, you can almost smell the fresh snow and hear the geese honking as they glide by overhead). And my casual pictures (two) are of me standing next to my motorcycle overlooking a prominent river-valley in my state (great roads). I'm in jeans, boots, leather jacket, holding my helmet.
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I�d avoid the motorcycle picture if possible. You�re not trying to be cool, you�re trying to look harmless. Unless they�re asking specifically for a casual picture, just send the professional one. |
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Joined: 18 Jan 2003 Posts: 6613 Location: Need to know basis only.
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Posted: Fri Feb 24, 2012 1:50 am Post subject: |
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Members using this or any thread as an opportunity on this board to take shots at a particular group of people based on their nationality (whatever that nationality may be) are going to find themselves spending their leisure time elsewhere in the future.
This kind of inflammatory nonsense in furtherance of a personal agenda is not welcome or tolerated here.
Please take yourself to a board where it is before the decision is made for you.
No more warnings. None.
Thread locked while the above is digested. |
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