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A.K.A.T.D.N.
Joined: 12 Jun 2004
Posts: 170
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 Posted: Fri Oct 15, 2004 10:43 am Post subject: Add on Poem |
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You guys here always seem to criticize poetry without writing it yourselves, so I'd like to test your hand at such a skill.. I'll start a poem, and anyone else here, feel free to add on to see if you can form something meaningful. That is, if you're brave enough.
Rules: Everyone must post four lines per stanzas. No personal attacks on the other persons stanza, meaning STICK TO THE THEME as best you can. Let's see if you can really write poetry.
POEMS THAT ADD MEANING
A silent tremble made me crave the delicacies of life
Shaking my computer and soft, swivelling chair.
Does this really mean anything at all, I thought,
The message I want to send stranded in this epicenter here?
Last edited by A.K.A.T.D.N. on Sat Oct 16, 2004 4:29 am; edited 1 time in total |
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colin
Joined: 14 Apr 2003
Posts: 45
Location: You mean right now?
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| Posted: Fri Oct 15, 2004 1:48 pm Post subject: |
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Oh lord I ask for you to forgive
and guide me through incoherent narratives
for I know not what I do and say
screw it,I'll post it anyway |
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kait
Joined: 17 Jun 2004
Posts: 93
Location: Lungtan, Taiwan
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| Posted: Sat Oct 16, 2004 3:25 am Post subject: |
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But, AKA,
You only wrote 1 stanza. Did you mean we should write 4 lines per stanza? |
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kait
Joined: 17 Jun 2004
Posts: 93
Location: Lungtan, Taiwan
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| Posted: Sat Oct 16, 2004 4:11 am Post subject: |
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They vigorously scoop and sift
Rattling through my fictions.
It is to no avail, but next time
They may use clumping litter.
See?!!! You're not alone in your poetic talent.  |
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A.K.A.T.D.N.
Joined: 12 Jun 2004
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| Posted: Sat Oct 16, 2004 4:26 am Post subject: |
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| kait wrote: |
But, AKA,
You only wrote 1 stanza. Did you mean we should write 4 lines per stanza? |
Well anyway, the day turned out clear
Pasted with plastic white clouds like the comics I read
As to why I'm here, in between the computer
And the swivel of a soft, safe chair. |
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wombat
Joined: 18 Jun 2004
Posts: 134
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| Posted: Sat Oct 16, 2004 5:44 am Post subject: |
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| colin wrote: |
Oh lord I ask for you to forgive
and guide me through incoherent narratives
for I know not what I do and say
screw it,I'll post it anyway |
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