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Sashadroogie
Joined: 17 Apr 2007 Posts: 11061 Location: Moskva, The Workers' Paradise
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johnslat
Joined: 21 Jan 2003 Posts: 13859 Location: Santa Fe, New Mexico, USA
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Posted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 2:56 pm Post subject: |
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Dear Sasha,
Not only spelling:
" . . . warned that too many employers were having to invest in remedial literacy lessons for their staff."
At least I've always thought that the modal helping verb "have/has to" is non-continuous - though I suppose that might be an "American English/British English difference.
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" . . . Mr Duncombe, who runs travel, mobile phones and clothing websites, . . . ."
Hmm, first time I've heard of "mobile clothing" - I think a comma after "phones" would have been nice.
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"I know that industry bemoaning the education system is nothing new . . . "
Shouldn't the subject of the gerund "bemoaning" be possessive (i.e. industry's.)
"When recruiting school and university leavers, Mr Duncombe says too many applications have contained spelling mistakes or poor grammar."
Poor grammar such as, say, misplaced adverbial phrases?
How about punctuation? ""Our recent research shows that 42% of employers are not satisfied with the basic reading and writing skills of school and college leavers and almost half have had to invest in remedial training to get their staff's skills up to scratch.
"This situation is a real concern and the government must make the improvement of basic literacy and numeracy skills of all school and college leavers a top priority."
Two rather long compound sentences with no commas before the coordinate conjunctions.
That's from a very quick proofread - I likely missed even more.
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Sashadroogie
Joined: 17 Apr 2007 Posts: 11061 Location: Moskva, The Workers' Paradise
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Posted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 5:58 pm Post subject: |
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Dear Johnslat
Not sure I can go along with all your criticisms, especially the one pertaining to 'having to' ( a semi-modal, I believe), but there is no doubt that things are not what they used to be in the sacred halls of the BBC. Standards have slipped dramatically, especially on the website. Ah! The irony. So multi-layered!
Perhaps there's an opportunity for an 'entreprenurial' TEFLer
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johnslat
Joined: 21 Jan 2003 Posts: 13859 Location: Santa Fe, New Mexico, USA
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Posted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 7:03 pm Post subject: |
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Dear Sasha,
Ah, so you are having to disagree with me. However, I am having to agree with you about have/has to's not really being a modal (although it's often grouped with the modals in many textbooks.)
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Sashadroogie
Joined: 17 Apr 2007 Posts: 11061 Location: Moskva, The Workers' Paradise
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johnslat
Joined: 21 Jan 2003 Posts: 13859 Location: Santa Fe, New Mexico, USA
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Posted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 7:33 pm Post subject: |
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Dear Sasha,
But why would you want to use the present continuous form
"We had better be respecting the rules . . . "
when you're writing about a usual action?
" . . . when we write comments on a forum . . ."
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Sashadroogie
Joined: 17 Apr 2007 Posts: 11061 Location: Moskva, The Workers' Paradise
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Posted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 7:46 pm Post subject: |
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Dear Johnslat
I was echoing your own free (mis)use of such continuous forms, and then immediately following up with a perfectly valid use, from the headline.
I guess I am just in contrary humour today. The Moscow city fathers have seen fit to cut my hot water supply for a week, while they make their annual repairs to the central heating system. The engineers had better be working overtime to get it back by next week...grrr!
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johnslat
Joined: 21 Jan 2003 Posts: 13859 Location: Santa Fe, New Mexico, USA
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Posted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 8:05 pm Post subject: |
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Dear Sasha,
Oh, I hope you are not having to take cold showers (though they're very good for vodka hangovers, or so I'm told. )
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John |
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Captain_Fil
Joined: 06 Jan 2011 Posts: 604 Location: California - the land of fruits and nuts
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Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 1:52 am Post subject: |
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Spelling mistakes on websites?!
Hasn't anyone heard of Spell Check?
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Sashadroogie
Joined: 17 Apr 2007 Posts: 11061 Location: Moskva, The Workers' Paradise
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Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 4:30 am Post subject: |
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The more I think about it, the more I am having to concede that cold showers are not such a bad thing. After such a bracing early morning experience, a shot of restorative spirits cannot easily be denied. Good way to start the day. Sets you up till lunch time. |
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Sashadroogie
Joined: 17 Apr 2007 Posts: 11061 Location: Moskva, The Workers' Paradise
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Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 4:31 am Post subject: |
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Captain_Fil wrote: |
Spelling mistakes on websites?!
Hasn't anyone heard of Spell Check?
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Fromm the website comments:
Eye have a spelling chequer,
It came with my Pea Sea.
It plane lee marks four my revue
Miss Steaks I can knot sea.
Eye strike the quays and type a whirred
And weight four it two say
Weather eye am write oar wrong
It tells me straight a weigh.
Eye ran this poem threw it,
Your shore real glad two no.
Its vary polished in its weigh.
My chequer tolled me sew. |
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scot47
Joined: 10 Jan 2003 Posts: 15343
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Posted: Sat Jul 16, 2011 4:57 pm Post subject: |
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I am thinking you people are writing nonsenses. |
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johnslat
Joined: 21 Jan 2003 Posts: 13859 Location: Santa Fe, New Mexico, USA
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Posted: Sat Jul 16, 2011 5:02 pm Post subject: |
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Dear scot47,
Funny - you don't LOOK Indian/Pakistani.
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John |
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Sashadroogie
Joined: 17 Apr 2007 Posts: 11061 Location: Moskva, The Workers' Paradise
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Captain_Fil
Joined: 06 Jan 2011 Posts: 604 Location: California - the land of fruits and nuts
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Posted: Sun Jul 17, 2011 4:49 pm Post subject: |
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Sashadroogie wrote: |
Eye have a spelling chequer,
It came with my Pea Sea.
It plane lee marks four my revue
Miss Steaks I can knot sea.
Eye strike the quays and type a whirred
And weight four it two say
Weather eye am write oar wrong
It tells me straight a weigh.
Eye ran this poem threw it,
Your shore real glad two no.
Its vary polished in its weigh.
My chequer tolled me sew. |
Ewe may halve a pointe.
Butt, Spell Cheque is still grate.
Of coarse, won must proof reed, two.
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