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themanymoonsofjupiter
Joined: 26 Jun 2005 Posts: 205 Location: The Big Link
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Posted: Sun Oct 30, 2011 10:35 pm Post subject: Verb tenses are driving me mad |
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i realise it's one thing for a student to be able to do a grammar exercise properly and another to apply it. however, my students are (mostly) pretty far advanced in that they have no problem in general communication, yet they still make heaps of verb tense mistakes in writings. it is not that the student is unaware of the proper tense--it is simply a general lack of attention to the problem. i know there's no quick fix, but i am looking for ideas to work on this. |
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George Macartney
Joined: 25 Oct 2011 Posts: 10
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Posted: Mon Oct 31, 2011 3:11 am Post subject: |
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well typically a lot of chinese students know the grammar receptively, but not productively. unless gaokao and CET have changed since i last checked, they haven't really had much chance to practise production, and usually aim at these fixed-expression "skeleton key" answers to english composition questions.
you can use an error code to highlight the verb tense errors (a red "v" by every verb error) and see if they can correct them themselves. if they can't, you need to teach it. if they can, they'll know to take a bit more time next time (unless their schedule's already overloaded). |
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Miles Smiles

Joined: 07 Jun 2010 Posts: 1294 Location: Heebee Jeebee
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Posted: Mon Oct 31, 2011 8:26 am Post subject: |
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well typically a lot of chinese students know the grammar receptively, but not productively. unless gaokao and CET have changed since i last checked, they haven't really had much chance to practise production, and usually aim at these fixed-expression "skeleton key" answers to english composition questions.
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Man, you really nailed the problem.
Though now out of style in the States, I learned to conjugate in all tenses, voices and modes through repetition. It was a lot like learning musical scales. One must play the scales more than once, and one must play them regularly in order to master them. It's sort of weird that people who are learning a musical instrument can understand the value of frequent repetition, but those who are learning languages can't. |
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kev7161
Joined: 06 Feb 2004 Posts: 5880 Location: Suzhou, China
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Posted: Mon Oct 31, 2011 8:41 am Post subject: |
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I will do a "daily edit" exercise often in my Language Arts class. I will write a sentence on the board with 4 or 5 errors and the kids are to copy that erroneous sentence in their notebook, find and correct the errors if they can, and then write the corrected sentence again. Many of my students can find most, if not all of the mistakes with ease.
However, give them a small writing assignment (3 or 4 sentences max) and their work is riddled with errors, regardless of the fact that I admonish them to go back and do their own "daily edit". It's maddening. |
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Old Surrender

Joined: 01 Jun 2009 Posts: 393 Location: The World's Largest Tobacco Factory
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Posted: Mon Oct 31, 2011 10:25 am Post subject: |
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It's damned maddening. My kids are worksheet warriors and can fix each others errors during peer review time, but when it comes to their own work it they just can't seem to manage it. |
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Cairnsman
Joined: 22 Jun 2009 Posts: 203
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Posted: Mon Oct 31, 2011 1:37 pm Post subject: |
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I will do a "daily edit" exercise often in my Language Arts class �. |
Sounds like an interesting exercise. May I try?
I will do a "daily edit" exercise often in my Language Arts class. I will write a sentence on the board with 4 or 5 errors and the kids are to copy that erroneous sentence in their notebook, find and correct the errors if they can, and then write the corrected sentence again. Many of my students can find most, if not all of the mistakes with ease.
However, give them a small writing assignment (3 or 4 sentences max) and their work is riddled with errors, regardless of the fact that I admonish them to go back and do their own "daily edit". It's maddening.
I often do a �daily edit� exercise in my Language Arts class. I write a sentence on the board with 4 or 5 errors and the kids copy that erroneous sentence in the notebooks, find and correct the errors if they can and then write the corrected sentence again. Many of my students can find most, if not all, of the mistakes with ease.
However, give them a small writing assignment (3 or 4 sentences max) and their work is riddled with errors, so I admonish them and tell them to do a �daily edit� on their own sentences. It's maddening!
How did I do, teacher? |
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kev7161
Joined: 06 Feb 2004 Posts: 5880 Location: Suzhou, China
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Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2011 6:53 am Post subject: |
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You could use a little more practice, quite frankly.
Don't be an asshat. The simple sentences I use in my language classes come directly from a textbook. I will never pretend to be perfect in English and I would never expect my students to be either. However, once you teach something (such as subject/verb agreement), oh I don't know, a few dozen times to students, you'd expect them to get it a bit more easily.
Now, go on being your usual, grammatically perfect self Cairnsman and leave us to our bitching!  |
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LarssonCrew
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Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2011 1:20 am Post subject: |
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Just to pick up on something from Cairnsman, you edited '...and the kids are to copy that erroneous sentence in their notebook' to '...and the kids copy that erroneous sentence in the notebooks.'
I would have personally thought that:
'...and the kids are to copy that erroneous sentence in their notebooks' sounds far better than 'the notebooks'.
Hmm. |
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Cairnsman
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Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2011 4:10 pm Post subject: |
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Hmmm, indeed!
You compared 12 words to 2.
It was unintentional mistyping. My brain thought �their� but my fingers typed �the� and Microsoft Word�s spell-check (obviously) didn�t detect the error.
So, �and the kids copy that erroneous sentence in their notebooks.� |
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askiptochina
Joined: 26 Feb 2010 Posts: 488 Location: Beijing
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Posted: Thu Nov 03, 2011 9:35 am Post subject: |
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it is not that the student is unaware of the proper tense--it is simply a general lack of attention to the problem. i know there's no quick fix, but i am looking for ideas to work on this. |
Interesting. You gave me an idea. Have the students write up something short. Collect the writings, and then pass them around to other students. Have them correct mistakes they see.
I used to do this in high school, but I forgot about it until now. |
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LongShiKong
Joined: 28 May 2007 Posts: 1082 Location: China
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Posted: Thu Nov 03, 2011 3:31 pm Post subject: |
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Do their written errors reflect spoken ones? If their errors are due to the Chenglish they've been exposed to all along, then you'll need to bombard them with textual, audio, and/or (ideally) video clips of the English equivalent.
Why not have them dictate written assignments to a partner in class or as homework? While the one doing the dictation may focus primarily on content, the transcriber will tend to (and can be tasked to) focus more on form. I commented about this in a Sept thread:
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The uni told me I should only grade four or five papers from each class, only the best student's papers. WTF? That's not a solution, that's lazy. I won't grade just a few papers and I won't just make red marks on papers without explanation. |
I know how you feel. Instead of 'correcting' writing, you might save time and face by developing a coding system that you and students both use to communicate areas of difficulty. An underline, for example might represent an inaccurate part of speech; a wavy underline: inappropriate vocabulary; a circled space: missing words; etc. The first time you hand back work, have students consult with peers to correct what they can before resubmitting (for you to correct what's left) Writing should be double or triple-spaced for this. Of course, you'll want to start off any such course with a Chenglish vs English lesson to avoid the most common errors.
The next time you have students submit work. Have (random) peers pre-code in pencil errors they spot telling them to track their progress over time in the % of errors they spot. It may compel them to proofread their writing the next time they submit.
To encourage risk-taking rather than sticking to simplistic writing just to avoid errors, you may wish to reward attempts (successful or not) at more complex sentence patterns and precise vocabulary as well as language taught. Again, with students helping you with this task, your work-load becomes lighter and their learning/motivation increases as they learn not only from their mistakes but also from peers.
I used to assign young kids 7 questions for homework. I'd give them half a mark for showing me they understood a question and knew the answer and up to another half mark for a complete accurate sentence reply. |
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El Chupacabra
Joined: 22 Jul 2009 Posts: 378 Location: Kwangchow
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Posted: Wed Nov 09, 2011 4:17 pm Post subject: |
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There are only two tenses: past and non-past. That's it, a binary choice.
When you refer to tense, do you really mean tense+aspect?
Most grammar books conflate both into one false notion of "tense". For example, "present continuous" and "past perfect" describe both parameters. These imprecise terms have made grammar incomprehensible.
Chinese are used to marking aspect, but not tense. In English, we mark both. If you study Chinese grammar, you will notice that are very precise in marking when events occur and whether they are finished or continuing.
Because most Chinese students understand precision grammar, our imprecise conflation of tense and aspect confound them. They can understand syntax, but only if their teachers understand it clearly enough to explain it. |
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Randolf
Joined: 04 Jun 2006 Posts: 15
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Posted: Thu Nov 10, 2011 12:46 pm Post subject: |
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There are only two tenses: past and non-past |
You are wrong. There are 3 tenses in English: Past, Present and Modal. I can give you examples of each of these if you require.
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When you refer to tense, do you really mean tense+aspect |
There is Tense, and there is Aspect. As mentioned above, there are 3 Tenses. There are also 4 types of Aspect: Simple, Progressive (sometimes called Continuous), Perfect Progressive (Continuous) and Perfect, so in all there are basically 3x4 = 12 types of Tense/Aspect in English, and 24 if one takes onto account complements of Transitivity for transitive verbs groups.
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Most grammar books conflate both into one false notion of "tense". For example, "present continuous" and "past perfect" describe both parameters. These imprecise terms have made grammar incomprehensible. |
I agree that there are few to no good grammar books, however Tense and Aspect are not 'conflated' 'false notions' (whatever that means). In fact the situation is very clear. It is your lack of understanding that is the obstacle for you. As far as the incomprehensibility of English grammar goes, speak for yourself.
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Because most Chinese students understand precision grammar, our imprecise conflation of tense and aspect confound them. They can understand syntax, but only if their teachers understand it clearly enough to explain it. |
I have no idea what you mean by 'precision grammar' or 'imprecise conflation'. Certainly you are totally misguided. A lot of stuff is ellipted in English though, as it is in all languages, but certainly students can never be aware of the ellipsis and how it works if they have never been taught the full form first.
Chinese 'English' teachers just work from long list of Chinese sentences that have been 'translated' into 'English' by the 'knowledgeable' souls who run the 'education' department. No Chinese teacher that I have met in 15 years in China has had the slightest idea about English grammar, and sadly for Chinese students (the ones that care anyway), neither have most of the foreign ones (not that many do care about such arcane matters anyway). |
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El Chupacabra
Joined: 22 Jul 2009 Posts: 378 Location: Kwangchow
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Posted: Fri Nov 11, 2011 3:56 am Post subject: |
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The proof is in the pudding.
I learned my syntax in a graduate linguistics course, using Carney as a base text. For those of us who can recall our Chomsky trees, tense is binary. That means two choices, for those of you in Rio Linda. |
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Randolf
Joined: 04 Jun 2006 Posts: 15
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Posted: Sun Nov 13, 2011 2:38 am Post subject: |
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Chomsky is a consumate sociologist and a peerless commentator on world affairs, but he has zero credibility as a linguist.
Neither you nor Chomsky has any idea about English. "trees" ye gods spare us his garbled nonsense. I've read all of Chomsky's 'linguistics' and it is nonsense from start to finish. A wonderful social commentator though and I enjoy his other work immensely.
FIRST PERSON PRESENT SIMPLE: I drink.
FIRST PERSON PAST SIMPLE: I drank.
FIRST PERSON MODAL SIMPLE: I must drink.
You can do this with each of the other 3 Aspect cases.
English has 3 tenses. The proof is in the pudding. |
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