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raewon
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Posted: Tue Oct 11, 2011 10:36 pm Post subject: this versus these question |
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Composers wanted to express emotion, movement, and ideas through music.
In order for music to express all this, composers had to develop new techniques.
In that second sentence, is it possible for "all this" to be used instead of
"all these"? Seems to me I've heard this usage many times, but it isn't
grammatically correct, is it?
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Jingo besus
Joined: 12 Sep 2011 Location: The Clipperton Suite
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Posted: Tue Oct 11, 2011 10:40 pm Post subject: |
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Is it because there Isn't a noun after the determiner, so it defaults to the singular form?
Otherwise it could be 'In order for music to express all of these elements...', elements being countable it then would be appropriate to use 'these' instead of 'this'.
Last edited by Jingo besus on Tue Oct 11, 2011 10:50 pm; edited 1 time in total |
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raewon
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Posted: Tue Oct 11, 2011 10:44 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks for the reply.
Yes, music is uncountable. But "this" would be emotion, movement, and ideas, wouldn't it? I think "all this" sounds right but looks/is wrong. |
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Jingo besus
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Posted: Tue Oct 11, 2011 10:51 pm Post subject: |
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sorry, i edited because i realised i'd initialy misread the sentence. you were too quick for me  |
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Chimie
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Posted: Tue Oct 11, 2011 10:52 pm Post subject: |
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all this
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all of these |
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raewon
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Posted: Tue Oct 11, 2011 11:05 pm Post subject: |
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Ha! Thanks for the edit.
Of course, I agree that "all of these elements" would be correct.
Chimie has said that "all this" or "all of these" could be used. What is the reasoning that makes "all this" grammatically correct? Is it just as
Jingo besus has said (due to the absence of a noun)?
Thanks a lot. |
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Jingo besus
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Posted: Wed Oct 12, 2011 12:43 am Post subject: |
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I think the issue is that the subject of the sentence is purely contextual (you know its about emotion, movement, and ideas, but only because of the sentence before it).
You need to know whether the noun is countable or uncountable in order to pick the correct determiner but if you isolate that sentence you have no context to make this decision, so without this information it would be treated as if its uncountable by default, ie the sigular 'this'.
This isn't based on any teaching experience though, just what i've been picking up from trying to relearn my grammar basics... |
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Zyzyfer

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Posted: Wed Oct 12, 2011 2:45 am Post subject: |
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I suspect "this" would be referring to the complete thought that is the first sentence. No hard rule to present, though. |
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lichtarbeiter
Joined: 15 Nov 2006 Location: Korea
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Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2011 7:42 am Post subject: Re: this versus these question |
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raewon wrote: |
Composers wanted to express emotion, movement, and ideas through music.
In order for music to express all this, composers had to develop new techniques.
In that second sentence, is it possible for "all this" to be used instead of
"all these"? Seems to me I've heard this usage many times, but it isn't
grammatically correct, is it?
Thank you for any replies. |
It would seem that English tolerates either, based on the specific meaning that you're trying to express.
If you want to express the three concepts as unique and separate, "all these" would be more logical.
Comparable example: "France and Spain share a border." (plural)
But if you want to present the three as a unified collective element, "all this" would be better.
Comparable example: "Mashed potatoes and gravy is essential to a Thanksgiving dinner." (singular)
It's kind of funny because if the sentence were simply "Composers wanted to express ideas through music," to replace it with "these" would be obligatory. In this case, a plural noun can be treated as singular by adding another element to it. Language is capable of bizarre phenomena.  |
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