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Hindsight
Joined: 02 Feb 2009
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Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2011 9:31 am Post subject: |
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Why do you haiku
Limerick is more rhythmic
Makes Korea look good
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loveless
Joined: 27 Jul 2010 Location: love is a danger of a different kind...
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Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2011 5:56 am Post subject: |
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ho dont know her place
in the Korea winter
ive wasted my life |
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interestedinhanguk

Joined: 23 Aug 2010
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Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2011 6:20 am Post subject: |
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baek chil ship man won
costly utilities bill
heating just one room |
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loveless
Joined: 27 Jul 2010 Location: love is a danger of a different kind...
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Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2011 7:36 am Post subject: |
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i yearn to be crushed
this sheer essence of my love
just to be with you |
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interestedinhanguk

Joined: 23 Aug 2010
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Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2011 7:45 am Post subject: |
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This is not the place
Loveless the thread is weather
Please go pine elsewhere |
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loveless
Joined: 27 Jul 2010 Location: love is a danger of a different kind...
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Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2011 8:04 am Post subject: |
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hey the trees burning
the world is so on fire
your body dont burn
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interestedinhanguk

Joined: 23 Aug 2010
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Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2011 8:09 am Post subject: |
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One syllable gone
Your second line incomplete
Just as your love life |
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loveless
Joined: 27 Jul 2010 Location: love is a danger of a different kind...
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Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2011 8:36 am Post subject: |
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they have arrived here
from so far away they came
this earth is not ours |
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Lastrova
Joined: 30 Dec 2010
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Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2011 4:45 pm Post subject: |
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As punctual as a finger
Switching off a freezer
Warm weather returns |
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sallymonster

Joined: 06 Feb 2010 Location: Seattle area
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Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2011 6:41 pm Post subject: |
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I'm in Boracay
Too windy cold and rainy
Why did I bother? |
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interestedinhanguk

Joined: 23 Aug 2010
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Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2011 6:45 pm Post subject: |
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Just another day
Holidays do not matter
When one is foreign |
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interestedinhanguk

Joined: 23 Aug 2010
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Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2011 6:49 pm Post subject: |
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all alone today
becoming one more loveless
please give me pity |
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loveless
Joined: 27 Jul 2010 Location: love is a danger of a different kind...
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Posted: Thu Feb 03, 2011 2:32 am Post subject: |
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warm breeze is the wind
signals Spring is nearly here
love is in the air |
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loveless
Joined: 27 Jul 2010 Location: love is a danger of a different kind...
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Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2011 6:38 am Post subject: |
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sex-girl come down here
point your sex-gun at my head
ready aim fire |
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loveless
Joined: 27 Jul 2010 Location: love is a danger of a different kind...
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Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2011 12:37 pm Post subject: nap time |
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sleeping in the park
still, peaceful under the trees
red holes in their heads |
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