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Marcilla



Joined: 24 Oct 2005

PostPosted: Mon Dec 26, 2005 7:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ddeubel wrote:
Are you sure you have a BS in Electrical Engineering????????

I'm sure they'd look much more favourably on your application if you had a B.Sc. in Electrical Engineering. Immigration might get suspicious of a BS diploma.

DD


hahaha

As for my chest, I dunno, I think it's something about the suit

I'm mildly overweight, and sort of buff, but I look kinda like the kingpin from spider man when I have the suit on
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SPINOZA



Joined: 10 Jun 2005
Location: $eoul

PostPosted: Mon Dec 26, 2005 11:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Marcilla wrote:
okay, here's a revised version of the cover letter:

Subject: Application to English teaching positions in Korea

Body:
Dear Mr. Lee,

I saw your job postings on Dave's ESL Cafe, and would like to apply for an English teaching position. My name is Ray Marcilla, and I currently live in Spokane, Washington. I'm a native English speaker. I recently graduated from the University of Washington with a BS in Electrical Engineering.

I'd like to see some of the world outside of the US, and I think teaching English in Korea would be an excellent way to learn about Korea's culture and language.

As far as applicable experience, I have tutored many of my friends on Electrical Engineering, Math, and Physics. Also, I've studied Spanish and Japanese, so I'm familiar with many of the difficulties of learning a foreign language.

I'm very enthusiastic about finding a job, and eagerly await your response. I've attached a copy of my resume to examine.

Thank you for your time and consideration,
- Ray Marcilla

Attached: (resume)


I guess that I'm not that worried about little kids.. they aren't usually that hard to control so long as you have a cool head, just annoying. I'd imagine that adults wouldn't be that interested in working hard and learning, and teenagers would have an attidue problem, so I'll go with whatever decent-sounding job I can find

Here's a few different photos; maybe one would be more suitable:
http://students.washington.edu/mnrtyman/pub/suit_expr1.jpg
http://students.washington.edu/mnrtyman/pub/suit_expr2.jpg
http://students.washington.edu/mnrtyman/pub/suit_expr3.jpg
http://students.washington.edu/mnrtyman/pub/suit_expr4.jpg

I know my tie is a little out of place in some of those, but I can just photoshop it, or maybe retake the photo (but the weather is awful in Spokane now, so the background won't be all perdy)

Thanks again for all the advice


Re the photos, it'd probably be better if you did either a big cheesy grin or smug politician look. However, I think the jokey-smily one of the first two you posted is the best. You look like a fun guy on that one. That's worth bearing in mind.

Don't use contractions like "I'd". Formal written English, like a job application, one of a few situations where one must use overly-formal language, must contain "I would" and "I am". Mind you, the Koreans reading your cover letter may not notice, but some might and it's better to be safe than sorry. You should do it for its own sake, regardless, especially as it appears you'll be job-hunting in the US in the not-too-distant future.



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I saw your job postings on Dave's ESL Cafe, and would like to apply for an English teaching position.


Dear Mr Lee,

Please find in the enclosed attachments to this email my full resume and a recent photograph in (keen) response to the job advertisements on Dave's ESL Cafe for positions teaching English.

Quote:
My name is Ray Marcilla, and I currently live in Spokane, Washington.


Say either "Washington State in the North West of the United States" or "Washington DC".

That's me being picky, as your letter isn't bad at all generally.
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denverdeath



Joined: 21 May 2005
Location: Boo-sahn

PostPosted: Tue Dec 27, 2005 5:32 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

If the last poster was being nitpicky, I guess I'm really being nitpicky. Pretty good letter, but look at the couple of slight changes I made and sound them out in your head and go with whichever sounds better to you. Pics are good now! I'd go with either two or four if I were you.

Marcilla wrote:

Dear Mr. Lee:

I saw your job postings on Dave's ESL Cafe, and would like to apply for an English teaching position. My name is Ray Marcilla, and I currently live in Spokane, Washington. I'm a native English speaker. I recently graduated from the University of Washington with a BS in Electrical Engineering.

I'd like to see some of the world outside of the US, and I think teaching English in Korea would be an excellent way to learn about Korea's culture and language.

As far as applicable experience, I have tutored many of my friends in Electrical Engineering, Math, and Physics. Also, I've studied Spanish and Japanese, so I'm familiar with many of the difficulties of learning a foreign language.

I'm very enthusiastic about finding a job, and eagerly await your response. I've attached a copy of my resume for your review/for you to examine.

Thank you for your time and consideration,

Ray Marcilla

Attached: (resume)
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runaway



Joined: 05 Dec 2005
Location: Suwon

PostPosted: Tue Dec 27, 2005 5:41 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

[I guess that I'm not that worried about little kids.. they aren't usually that hard to control so long as you have a cool head, just annoying. I'd imagine that adults wouldn't be that interested in working hard and learning, and teenagers would have an attidue problem, so I'll go with whatever decent-sounding job I can find]

Are you really sure you want to teach at all? I haven't had much experience with 'little kids' so i'll leave that one alone - but as for the generalisation that adults won't work hard or be interested and that teenagers have attitude problems - I suggest it may be you with the attitude problem.

Teaching isn't just about turning up and delivering a heap of material so you can pick up a pay check!

I already feel sorry for your students[/quote]
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Marcilla



Joined: 24 Oct 2005

PostPosted: Tue Dec 27, 2005 11:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks again for all the feedback

As for being a good teacher, I dunno

It's really rewarding to have at least one student who's genuinely interested in learning, and to help them through something

Those other generalizations were just from what I read on the forums

Anyway with any luck I'll become Great Teacher Marcilla
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Shooter McGavin



Joined: 22 Nov 2005
Location: ROK

PostPosted: Tue Dec 27, 2005 9:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think that something worth considering before you come here that hasn't really been mentioned is how you will be perceived here. You should have no problems from the kids, but don't expect it to be anything like University. I taught Public Admin at my old Uni, and it was good. The kids were brutally lazy, but the Prof worked with me, told me what he expected, let me get to that however I wanted, and supported me when I had questions and concerns. You know, a relationship with dialogue and direction. Don't expect these things in a hagwon. No one will tell you what you're doing until about 5 minutes before you do it. If you have suggestions about how things could be better (ex: how to make the Christmas Party more authentic, seeing as you lived through many Christmases), don't expect anyone to listen. I have an MA, my coworker has a PhD, yet people are amazed when we can print a piece of paper or send an email. Expect random interventions from Korean teachers with "concerns" they have about your teaching, and how it doesn't match their "methodology." Of course, you would have no way of knowing, because no one will ever tell you what the methodology actually is, and you naturally will have received no training. If you view yourself as a professional, like I do, this can be a bitter pill to swallow. My stress level has declined considerably since I gave up trying, and I am admittedly going through the motions now. It's a pitiful attitude no doubt, but it's the only thing that keeps me sane.
Ask yourself this: could I work a job where people around me don't respect what I do, and provide no assistance, training or direction? Can I read minds?
Of course, there is no guarantee that this will happen to you. This is my experience. It is the experience of many others on this board as well, so now you have been warned that it COULD happen to you.
And yes I'm bitter. I didn't work hard to be the first in my family ever with a post-graduate degree only to become a hagwon monkey. I can deal with most of the stuff in Korea that really bugs the other posters on this board, but the lack of respect I get at work really gets me mad. Mad
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Alias



Joined: 24 Jan 2003

PostPosted: Wed Dec 28, 2005 1:30 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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My stress level has declined considerably since I gave up trying, and I am admittedly going through the motions now. It's a pitiful attitude no doubt, but it's the only thing that keeps me sane.


I had to do the same thing at the last kiddy hagwon I worked at. Hagwon monkey was definitely the worst job I ever had.
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Shooter McGavin



Joined: 22 Nov 2005
Location: ROK

PostPosted: Wed Dec 28, 2005 4:02 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Alias wrote:
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My stress level has declined considerably since I gave up trying, and I am admittedly going through the motions now. It's a pitiful attitude no doubt, but it's the only thing that keeps me sane.


I had to do the same thing at the last kiddy hagwon I worked at. Hagwon monkey was definitely the worst job I ever had.


OK, now that I'm calmed down a bit:

1. Thanks for understanding. What did you do to get through the days? If the kids weren't so awesome, I'd have gone ballistic long ago.

2. When I say I get no respect, I mean professionally. People respect me on a personal level, there just seems to be limited willingness to collaborate or to keep me informed of anything that's going on. I don't think that it is as simple as "that's Korea" either, because the Koreans seem to typically know what's up. The fact that the same 2 people constantly are left in the dark illustrates a lack of professional regard for those people.

3. I still put 110% into my classes. I love the kids, they are great. The girls are so sweet, but the boys are truly the best with their hilarious antics. Anytime I'm with the kids, I give my best. But other than that, when I have a break in classes, I don't even try to "look busy" like you are expected to. That's where I go through the motions.

So I hope that you will consider that before you come here Marcilla. If you think that teaching is a noble profession, or hope to work together with people, or even just want a basic idea of what the @*#^ is going on, you might be very disappointed.
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Marcilla



Joined: 24 Oct 2005

PostPosted: Wed Dec 28, 2005 12:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, I'd feel the way you do if they treated me like that at an engineering job, but hopefully it won't be so bad as a teacher, since I'm not a professional like you

Honestly it's less about the teaching for me and more that I want to get some sort of new experiences under my belt, and this just sounds like a really good way to do that

I should be okay so long as there's a curriculum to follow.. just spend lots of time going through it, and helping people with their pronunciation, right?

First

First

First

First

okay, that'll work

Survival

Sur vI val

survival

survival

survival

surrrr rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr vival
rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
okay, you got it

survival

This is survival english

survival

rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

survival english

is survival

That's what it's like with my Korean friends in America anyway
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Ya-ta Boy



Joined: 16 Jan 2003
Location: Established in 1994

PostPosted: Wed Dec 28, 2005 1:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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2. When I say I get no respect, I mean professionally. People respect me on a personal level, there just seems to be limited willingness to collaborate or to keep me informed of anything that's going on. I don't think that it is as simple as "that's Korea" either, because the Koreans seem to typically know what's up. The fact that the same 2 people constantly are left in the dark illustrates a lack of professional regard for those people.


This is one of the most common complaints about working here. I've whined about it more than once. When I'm in a good mood I'm able to shrug it off and not take it personally. It's just Korea and we're permanently out of the loop. When I am tired and/or in a bad mood, I take it as a personal insult. It's infuriating.

As far as I know, there is no known solution to it. (A partial solution is to ask the kids. They know more than the foreign teachers. The trick is to know when you need to ask and what you need to ask. There is no way to predict some of the things that happen, so there is no way to know what question to ask.)
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Marcilla



Joined: 24 Oct 2005

PostPosted: Sun Jan 01, 2006 3:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hello everyone, just incorporating your feedback into another draft

I've been so lazy these last few months.. for every day I spent 12 hours working on a project in EE, I think I've spent two or three days getting up at noon and then playing video games most of the day, walking the dog, and going to bed at 3 am

Subject: Application to English teaching positions in Korea

Body:
Dear Mr. Lee,

Please find in the enclosed attachments to this email my full resume and a recent photograph in response to the job advertisements on Dave's ESL Cafe for positions teaching English. My name is Ray Marcilla, and I currently live in Washington State, in the North West of the United States. I'm a native English speaker. I recently graduated from the University of Washington with a BS in Electrical Engineering.

I would like to see some of the world outside of the US, and I think teaching English in Korea would be an excellent way to learn about Korea's culture and language.

As far as applicable experience, I have tutored many of my friends on Electrical Engineering, Math, and Physics. Also, I've studied Spanish and Japanese, so I'm familiar with many of the difficulties of learning a foreign language.

I'm very enthusiastic about finding a job, and eagerly await your response. I've attached a copy of my resume for your review.

Thank you for your time and consideration,
- Ray Marcilla

Attached: (resume)

As for someone being burned out on dealing with administrative BS, hang in there buddy <3

Edit: I think I'll use this picture, btw
http://students.washington.edu/mnrtyman/pub/suit_expr2.jpg

Should I just attach it to the e-mails I send out applying to jobs, or should I send them the link?
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justagirl



Joined: 17 Jan 2003
Location: Cheonan/Portland

PostPosted: Mon Jan 02, 2006 12:02 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think you mention your attached resume 3 times in this latest draft of your cover letter. How about:

Dear Mr. Lee,
I recently saw your job openings posted on Dave's ESL Cafe, and would like to apply for an English teaching position. My name is Ray Marcilla, and I currently live in Washington state, which is in the Northwest of the United States.

I am a native English speaker and I recently graduated from the University of Washington with a BS in Electrical Engineering.

I believe I would be a good educator, as I already have applicable experience in teaching. I have tutored many of my friends in Electrical Engineering, Math, and Physics. Also, I've studied Spanish and Japanese, so I'm familiar with many of the difficulties of learning a foreign language.

On a more personal note, I am an honest, reliable, and energetic person and I'm interested in seeing some of the world outside of the United States. I think teaching English in Korea would be an excellent way to learn about Korea's culture and language.

I'm enthusiastic about finding a suitable job in Korea and working for a reputable school. I've attached a copy of my resume for your review. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you very soon,
- Ray Marcilla

Attached: (resume)
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Marcilla



Joined: 24 Oct 2005

PostPosted: Mon Jan 02, 2006 1:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

oh, good call

okay, I changed it to this:

(it's not going to say attached: resume at the bottom, that was just a reference to you and me)

Subject: Application to English teaching positions in Korea

Body:
Dear Mr. Lee,

Please find in the enclosed attachments to this email my full resume and a recent photograph in response to the job advertisements on Dave's ESL Cafe for positions teaching English. My name is Ray Marcilla, and I currently live in Washington State, in the North West of the United States. I'm a native English speaker. I recently graduated from the University of Washington with a BS in Electrical Engineering.

I would like to see some of the world outside of the US, and I think teaching English in Korea would be an excellent way to learn about Korea's culture and language.

As far as applicable experience, I have tutored many of my friends on Electrical Engineering, Math, and Physics. Also, I've studied Spanish and Japanese, so I'm familiar with many of the difficulties of learning a foreign language.

I'm very enthusiastic about finding a job, and eagerly await your response.

Thank you for your time and consideration,
- Ray Marcilla
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babtangee



Joined: 18 Dec 2004
Location: OMG! Charlie has me surrounded!

PostPosted: Mon Jan 02, 2006 7:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Marcilla, i took the liberty of re-writing your intro letter. I think you will find my edit more appropriate for the Korean ESL market. You can find it here:

http://img458.imageshack.us/img458/6701/coverletter10id.jpg
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MeanyMichi



Joined: 03 Jun 2005
Location: SNOW!!!

PostPosted: Mon Jan 02, 2006 10:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

babtangee wrote:
Marcilla, i took the liberty of re-writing your intro letter. I think you will find my edit more appropriate for the Korean ESL market. You can find it here:

http://img458.imageshack.us/img458/6701/coverletter10id.jpg


LOVE IT!!!
Wish I'd had that cover letter when I first came to Korea. Would have probably allowed me to skip the hagwon job and go straight to teaching uni.
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