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marckot
Joined: 16 Jan 2007 Location: Mokpo
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 5:21 pm Post subject: Grammar help please |
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I am a little stuck on the following sentence. Some help would be appreciated.
"It is regrettable, but it is a fact, that children do not look upon their parents, or their relations belonging to another generation, with the same degree of affection as their parents, or relations, look upon them."
Is the grammar in this sentence sound?
What is the function of the "as" in the sentence?
Is the "as" in this sentence a relative pronoun? |
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dpl
Joined: 06 Nov 2007 Location: Ilsan
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 5:42 pm Post subject: |
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It's a regrettable fact that children do not look upon their parents or grandparents as they had once looked upon them.
"as" is a conjunction |
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JustJohn

Joined: 18 Oct 2007 Location: Your computer screen
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 5:53 pm Post subject: |
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| To answer the original question, aside from terrible comma use I think it's okay. |
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marckot
Joined: 16 Jan 2007 Location: Mokpo
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 6:11 pm Post subject: |
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yeah someone went crazy with commas in this one.
I also thought it is a conjunction but the Korean teacher who showed me this thought it is a relative pronoun and wanted to add "with" at the end of the sentence after ".... look upon them."
............ look upon them with.
I had trouble following his train of thought. Can you explain why he thought this? |
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dpl
Joined: 06 Nov 2007 Location: Ilsan
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 7:32 pm Post subject: |
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| It is definitely a conjunction. The Korean Teacher is wrong. |
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JustJohn

Joined: 18 Oct 2007 Location: Your computer screen
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 8:12 pm Post subject: |
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I don't know about fancy names, but I think with might be right when you have the pronoun again at the end. For example:
John does his homework with the same pencil as Mary does hers (with).
Could just be that everyone I know says it wrong, but it sounds funny without with in there.
Personally I'd just rewrite the sentence because it's getting a little ungainly:
It is a regrettable fact that children do not look upon their parents or relations from other generations with the same degree of affection as their parents or relations look upon them. |
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nobbyken

Joined: 07 Jun 2006 Location: Yongin ^^
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 9:09 pm Post subject: |
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I would second JustJohns sentence.
The original is clumsy and would probably be confusing to anybody who wasn't a native speaker. |
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mercury

Joined: 05 Dec 2004 Location: Pusan
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 9:57 pm Post subject: |
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as is a preposition and a conjunction
*This is called a parenthetical expression (which is just an explanation, or another fact).
It is regrettable, but it is also a fact, that children do not look upon their parents (or any other family members from past generations)with the same degree of affection which their parents (or other family members) give to them. |
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