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BizzeeB123



Joined: 07 May 2009

PostPosted: Sat May 09, 2009 3:42 am    Post subject: Writing Club Forming Reply with quote

Hello, I've posted a version of this ad on craigslist Seoul (which doesn't get much traffic) and Groove magazine (which surprisingly hasn't received much of a response either) so I thought maybe I could try here, too.

I am trying to form a writing group for (relatively) serious writers living in Seoul. There is already a writing group (maybe two, in fact) which exists here, but I have been to several of the meetings and, although the members are very friendly, the quality of writing is, to be honest, a bit low. I have published work, and yes, I'm here teaching, like everyone else (!) but I don't really want to read works by people who have simply decided to start writing because they are here and need a hobby...

I've run a group in NYC before and what works best is about 5-6 people meeting bi-weekly, sharing work beforehand, and then workshopping it together. I already have 2 people from the current group whose work is pretty solid, I'm looking for about 3 more. If you're interested, please respond to this post with your email address, or send me a sample to [email protected].

thanks!
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VanIslander



Joined: 18 Aug 2003
Location: Geoje, Hadong, Tongyeong,... now in a small coastal island town outside Gyeongsangnamdo!

PostPosted: Sat May 09, 2009 5:32 am    Post subject: Re: Writing Club Forming Reply with quote

BizzeeB123 wrote:
...I am trying to form... I've run a group... I have published work... send me a sample...

send you a sample? so you can judge? because you have 'published' work?

have you published a book? have you published in any major magazines you care to name? any scripts that have gone into production? have you run a group that lasted more than a half dozen meetings and not when you were in university?

(your project here sounds as mickey mouse as those you criticize in the other writing groups; put bluntly, your deliberate vagueness is code for pompous attempt to look important)

there are over a dozen posters on Dave's who have published books, been journalists and/or are writing novels

if you truly want to attract writers then submit YOUR sample, state the actual nature of what you have "published" and use the language of facilitation rather than control when talking about how the group would operate - we might be open to having you facilitate the meetings and be secretary of our roundtable discussions

seriously man, here's some good advice: re-read what you wrote, think of your intended audience, and re-write
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BizzeeB123



Joined: 07 May 2009

PostPosted: Sat May 09, 2009 6:26 am    Post subject: ??? Reply with quote

wow, what a miserable, douche bag hater made that last post! his parents must be proud! Very Happy
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grunden



Joined: 18 Apr 2009

PostPosted: Sat May 09, 2009 7:37 am    Post subject: Re: ??? Reply with quote

BizzeeB123 wrote:
wow, what a miserable, douche bag hater made that last post! his parents must be proud! Very Happy



I agree with him. People write,and that is the point. I like to write, I am not that good, but I would never join a group with a 'leader' like you, you sound like a real *(&*(&
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hamlet712



Joined: 16 Mar 2007

PostPosted: Sat May 09, 2009 8:59 am    Post subject: Re: ??? Reply with quote

grunden wrote:
BizzeeB123 wrote:
wow, what a miserable, douche bag hater made that last post! his parents must be proud! Very Happy



I agree with him. People write,and that is the point. I like to write, I am not that good, but I would never join a group with a 'leader' like you, you sound like a real *(&*(&


yep I'd have to agree. I tried to get a group together before ( it never happenned) but there was interest from about 12 people of varying skill levels. Not one of them ever said, yeah I am such a high skill level that I only want to work with accomplished and intelligent writers, which is basicaly what you are saying.

Also, what do you constitute as good writing. Some people think that Stephen King is a two bit hack who got lucky and that his ideas are great, but his writing sucks. Try as I might I cant get into him and I agree with this sentiment.

Send you some writing samples BEFORE we start a club so you can judge if I am worthy, are you freaking kidding? I have too much pride and passion in my craft to have anyone not considering Buying my writing to look at it and deem me inferior.

Get of your high horse buddy, this post is insulting.
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John_ESL_White



Joined: 12 Nov 2008

PostPosted: Sat May 09, 2009 9:21 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I've been published in a small literary mag in the southern US called the Sun.

It's a pretty snooty, snobby rag.

I'd like to join your club, but I want to know more about you and your writing first. Are you worthy of me?

Put somethin up for me. I want a sample. And, what the heellll are you writing; fiction, non-fiction, poetry,...?

Can my friend who writes jokes join? What exactly are you looking for?

I think, my friend, your post shows that you lack fundamental writing skills. In fact, your message-e here is so vague that you are not getting interest; you are only getting questions. And, they are questions you should've answered in your OP.

It is no wonder that Groove mag and even, gasp, Craigslist shows you no interest. Your writing suks. If I'm wrong, prove it. pretentious such and such; so far, your sample shows you are not worthy of starting a writing club. whatever the he ll that is
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nomaster



Joined: 24 Nov 2005
Location: Hongseong-eup

PostPosted: Sat May 09, 2009 11:11 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm with Bizzee here, you guys are closing off all hope of conversation with your virulent negativity.
You suppose you know his personality because he asked a simple question, made a simple request to create a productive group.
Beginning level groups and mixed groups serve different purposes than a group of folks who want to grow faster dig deeper than would be possible with "lower" level groups.
Lower in this case does not mean less talented, it means beginning.
Get off your high horses and open up with positive questions if you have them.

If you can't be constructive, move away from the keyboard!
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huffdaddy



Joined: 25 Nov 2005

PostPosted: Sat May 09, 2009 4:08 pm    Post subject: Re: ??? Reply with quote

BizzeeB123 wrote:
wow, what a miserable, douche bag hater made that last post! his parents must be proud! Very Happy


Very eloquent. I can see the professionalism in your craft. I particularly like the channeling of e.e. cummings.
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Young FRANKenstein



Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Location: Castle Frankenstein (that's FRONKensteen)

PostPosted: Sat May 09, 2009 6:03 pm    Post subject: Re: Writing Club Forming Reply with quote

BizzeeB123 wrote:
I don't really want to read works by people who have simply decided to start writing because they are here and need a hobby...

Then you're posting in the wrong place. You could try asking Gord Sellar, who publishes quite a lot, but then I have the feeling you would be as below him and others are below you.
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mack the knife



Joined: 16 Jan 2003
Location: standing right behind you...

PostPosted: Sun May 10, 2009 1:56 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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seriously man, here's some good advice: re-read what you wrote, think of your intended audience, and re-write


Bravo! Bravo! Laughing


In any case, it's not about what you write, it's all about what others write about you. Anyone can be a legend in their own mind.
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John_ESL_White



Joined: 12 Nov 2008

PostPosted: Sun May 10, 2009 8:30 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

nomaster wrote:
I'm with Bizzee here, you guys are closing off all hope of conversation with your virulent negativity.
You suppose you know his personality because he asked a simple question, made a simple request to create a productive group.
Beginning level groups and mixed groups serve different purposes than a group of folks who want to grow faster dig deeper than would be possible with "lower" level groups.
Lower in this case does not mean less talented, it means beginning.
Get off your high horses and open up with positive questions if you have them.

If you can't be constructive, move away from the keyboard!


Fair enough.

Who is eligible for your club?

What is the submission criteria?

Who judges the submissions?

Is there a sample of the "founders': work?


Is that fair enough "nomaster"?


I am a writer. I studied writing theory for five years. Maybe OP did too, but, GDit, he needs to show it.

And, for an oversaes writer, what exactly is bad writing? I, personaly, think all first person writing by kids ( under 40) is terrible. The overseas crowd is a proliffic writing community. Culture shock manifests in most of our scribbles.

I give the OP the benefit of the doubt though. However, he has to show some skill. He/she needs to put something somewhere and let us see it. Otherwise, he is another lonely bastard with a pen, or, in these days, a computer.

If OP puts up something. I'll put up something from uni that was published nationally.

Come on OP.
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mack the knife



Joined: 16 Jan 2003
Location: standing right behind you...

PostPosted: Sun May 10, 2009 4:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Quote:
he asked a simple question, made a simple request to create a productive group.


Let's start over and work this from a different angle:

Greetings,

Do you have a passion for writing? Are you currently living in (city), Korea? Do you enjoy sharing your works? I'm currently in the process of establishing a community of expat writers whose members share their works, give and receive constructive criticism, and generally support the efforts of other members. If this sounds like the thing for you, please contact me at (________________). Serious inquiries only, please. Very Happy

Cheers,
Buzztard
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roadwork



Joined: 24 Nov 2008
Location: Goin' up the country

PostPosted: Sun May 10, 2009 4:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

HAH!! Notice that this douchie hasn't been back yet?
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harlowethrombey



Joined: 17 Mar 2009
Location: Seoul

PostPosted: Sun May 10, 2009 4:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

-More than 30 published articles.

-Presented at the English Conference.

-National English Scholar

-My Mom really likes my work.

-Got a gold star in the third grade.

-Frequently published on the internet site:Dave's ESL



Sniff, you are all below me.
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BizzeeB123



Joined: 07 May 2009

PostPosted: Mon May 11, 2009 5:24 am    Post subject: to the kind community of korean teachers... Reply with quote

Wow, it's amazing how much genuinely bitter invective can be spewed off in response to a relatively benign posting - unhappy with our lives, our we, 'professors'?

Yes, objectivity in determining 'quality' in writing is a difficult thing to ascertain, but no, it is not impossible. And no, it is not arrogant to say that the writing of others is not as good as one's own writing, especially when comparing one's own writing to pieces which are often grammatically/syntactically incorrect and/or entirely devoid of creativity.

I taught English Composition at a college in NY for several semesters before coming here and no, that does not, by default, make me a 'good' writer. However, when I wanted to form a writing group in New York City, which I daresay has a slightly more fertile and yes, 'better', writing scene than the expat community of Seoul, I posted an ad and received dozens of replies, with samples, with which I compared my own writing to see where people were creatively and artistically. Then I led the group for a year. That's kind of how it works.

So please, if you have nothing better to do with your time than cut down someone you don't know whose posting you've misunderstood because you are dissatisfied with where your own life's path has taken you, then that is something to take up with your therapist or your afternoon Advanced class. As for my part, I'm still looking for a few serious writers, with whom I'll gladly share my work for mutual critique.
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