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raewon



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PostPosted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 8:43 pm    Post subject: question on comma before "because" and "for&q Reply with quote

I have another question about the "correct" usage of the comma - this time before "because" and "for".

Here are the sentences in question:

(1) I was late for the meeting, because my car broke down.
(2) I was late for the meeting because my car broke down.

(3) The store is closed, because today is a holiday.
(4) The store is closed, for today is a holiday.

In (1) and (2) I don't think there is any difference in meaning, making me wonder whether or not it is correct to use the comma. Are both acceptable, or is (2) the only one that is OK?

I wonder whether or not (3) and (4) are correct with the commas.

I found this from the Chicago Manuel of Style:


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Q. When do you use a comma before �because�? I feel that I never need to put a comma before �because� because any information after it is necessary. What are your thoughts?

A. I disagree. Here�s the old example that comes to mind:
He didn�t run, because he was afraid.
He didn�t run because he was afraid.
In the first sentence, �because he was afraid� isn�t necessary; the main thing is that he didn�t run, and the reason is incidental. The second sentence, which omits the comma, is unclear. It might mean that he ran, but not because he was afraid. To prevent confusion, sometimes you need the comma.


But there is no possibility of this confusion with the sentences in question. Does this mean that the commas in (1), (3), and (4) are unnecessary....
or are they incorrect?

Thanks a lot for your input on this one.
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dharma bum



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PostPosted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 9:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

this may not be correct, but here's my take on things. the comma is used in this situation to set off a clause that is not essential, so with sentences like these (i.e., those that are not negative), the appropriateness of the comma depends on what your main point is.

(1) I was late for the meeting, because my car broke down.
(2) I was late for the meeting because my car broke down.

with these two examples, if you are speaking with the intention of making the reason you were late (more or less) equal in importance to the fact that you were late, you might want to use #2. if, on the other hand, your main purpose is to communicate the fact that you were late and the second clause is just (secondary) detail, you might want to use #1.

for the second set of examples, i think #1 could go either way comma-wise depending, once again, on your intention. for #2, i would always include the comma just because i think the use of "for" indicates a movement to the discussion of secondary information.
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Mr. Pink



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PostPosted: Wed Apr 07, 2010 12:31 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I looked this up as my students always do ,because and it drives me nuts.

You use a comma before because only if the reason you are giving isn't linked to the first part. For almost every sentence your student will use, they should not be using ,because.
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raewon



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PostPosted: Wed Apr 07, 2010 2:22 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks for the replies.

Mr. Pink - can I ask what you looked it up in? I'm not questioning your response - if it was in a book that I don't have I will think about getting it.
Thanks.
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The Cosmic Hum



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PostPosted: Wed Apr 07, 2010 5:53 am    Post subject: Re: question on comma before "because" and "f Reply with quote

raewon wrote:
I have another question about the "correct" usage of the comma - this time before "because" and "for".

Here are the sentences in question:

(1) I was late for the meeting, because my car broke down.
(2) I was late for the meeting because my car broke down.

(3) The store is closed, because today is a holiday.
(4) The store is closed, for today is a holiday.

In (1) and (2) I don't think there is any difference in meaning, making me wonder whether or not it is correct to use the comma. Are both acceptable, or is (2) the only one that is OK?

I wonder whether or not (3) and (4) are correct with the commas.

I found this from the Chicago Manuel of Style:


Quote:
Q. When do you use a comma before �because�? I feel that I never need to put a comma before �because� because any information after it is necessary. What are your thoughts?

A. I disagree. Here�s the old example that comes to mind:
He didn�t run, because he was afraid.
He didn�t run because he was afraid.
In the first sentence, �because he was afraid� isn�t necessary; the main thing is that he didn�t run, and the reason is incidental. The second sentence, which omits the comma, is unclear. It might mean that he ran, but not because he was afraid. To prevent confusion, sometimes you need the comma.


But there is no possibility of this confusion with the sentences in question. Does this mean that the commas in (1), (3), and (4) are unnecessary....
or are they incorrect?

Thanks a lot for your input on this one.


Hello Raewon,

As for #4...the comma is correct...it is a compound sentence...two independent clauses joined by a coordinating conjunction.
#1, 2 3...are complex sentences.
The general rule is....Independent clause plus dependent clause...no comma required.
Dependent clause, independent clause....comma required
I was late for the meeting because my car broke down.
Because my car broke down, I was late for work.

I am sure you are aware of this already...just pointing out the difference with number 4.

As for the because comma...this is a complicated issue...and not all that common.
However, to use your sentences as an example...if we change the wording a bit...perhaps the meaning will be a bit clearer.
#1 - I am sorry I was late for the meeting, because my car broke down.
#2 - I am sorry I was late for the meeting because my car broke down.
In the first sentence�the person is sorry to be late.
In the second sentence�the person is sorry to be late because their car broke down�they are not necessarily sorry just being late.
If they had been late because of a winter storm�.well�maybe they wouldn't feel sorry about that.

Hope this helps.
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Mr. Pink



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PostPosted: Thu Apr 08, 2010 5:12 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

raewon wrote:
Thanks for the replies.

Mr. Pink - can I ask what you looked it up in? I'm not questioning your response - if it was in a book that I don't have I will think about getting it.
Thanks.


I did a google search and the answer was on a couple university writing center web pages. It might have been the UNC @ Chapel Hill one, as I know I get a lot of info off that site. Here is some of the info I use with my students:

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Do not use a comma to set off a because clause
A because clause needs to be set off by a comma only when it begins a sentence. Here are some reminders about when to use a comma with a because clause.
1. Use a comma after a "because" clause, placed before the main clause.
Example: Because the owner was arrested for embezzling retirement funds the company's stock fell.
Here the main clause is the company's stock fell. A comma is needed after the because clause at the beginning of the sentence
Revised: Because the owner was arrested for embezzling retirement funds, the company's stock fell.
2. Do not use a comma before a "because" clause that follows a main clause.
Example: The company's stock fell, because the owner was arrested for embezzling retirement funds.
Here the main clause (The company's stock fell) begins the sentence. No comma is needed between the main clause and the "because" clause that follows it.
Revised: The company's stock fell because the owner was arrested for embezzling retirement funds.

Sometimes, though, the "because clause" must be set off with a comma to avoid misreading:
� I knew that President Nixon would resign that morning, because my sister-in-law worked in the White House and she called me with the news.
Without that comma, the sentence says that Nixon's resignation was the fault of my sister-in-law. Nixon did not resign because my sister-in-law worked in the White House, so we set off that clause to make the meaning clearly parenthetical.
Could I infer the use/unuse of the comma before "because" in this way?
Hm... Is there anything to do with the so-called "negative transfer"?
For example, I don't think he is a good father => I think he is not a good father.

Ambiguities may occur if a comma is omitted in such kinds of negative sentences as in "The scheme was not approved because of the shortage of water." => "The scheme was approved not because of the shortage of water(but for some other reasons)."

In order to avoid the ambiguities, we have to punctuate the sentence before "because" => The scheme was not approved, because of the shortage of water. The "because-clause" has now become an supplementary information, an only answer to the disapproval). Was I getting it right? Thank you.

You use a comma with because when you are using it as the beginning of a dependent clause or modifying clause. For example
Because Latoya was allergic to shrimp, Laquetta opted to make steak for the dinner party.
or
Uncle Joe, because of his demetia, accidentally confused me with the grim reaper, subsequently opting to throw a bag of potato chips at my head.
BECAUSE IS NOT A CONJUCTION...CONSEQUENTLY IT SHOULD NEVER BE USED AS ONE. THESE ARE THE TWO GENERALLY ACCEPTED USES FOR COMMAS AND BECAUSE.
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bobbybigfoot



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PostPosted: Thu Apr 08, 2010 11:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

DO NOT use commas with because UNLESS "because" is starting the sentence (as a clause).

Because my car broke down, I was late for the meeting. = OK

I was late for the meeting, because my car broke down. = WRONG
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reactionary



Joined: 22 Oct 2006
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 08, 2010 11:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

bobbybigfoot wrote:
DO NOT use commas with because UNLESS "because" is starting the sentence (as a clause).

Because my car broke down, I was late for the meeting. = OK

I was late for the meeting, because my car broke down. = WRONG


This. goes for if, unless, etc as well.
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The Cosmic Hum



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PostPosted: Fri Apr 09, 2010 7:01 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

bobbybigfoot wrote:
DO NOT use commas with because UNLESS "because" is starting the sentence (as a clause).

Because my car broke down, I was late for the meeting. = OK

I was late for the meeting, because my car broke down. = WRONG


...this is overly simplistic...and not entirely correct...this point has been covered already...something new to add would be nice.
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The Cosmic Hum



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PostPosted: Fri Apr 09, 2010 7:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Raewon,

In "The Grammar Book"....they do touch on this subject.
It only mentions what has been mentioned already in this thread, so not worth buying just for that point.
However, it is a great book.
I highly recommend it as a useful resource manual.
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Hyeon Een



Joined: 24 Jun 2005

PostPosted: Fri Apr 09, 2010 7:25 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Number 4 is great...

If you're taking a 'history of grammar' class.

"for" is so rarely used that way it's not worth teaching, except when explaining 'literature'.
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jugbandjames



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PostPosted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 6:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

The rule for comma usage with subordinate clauses is that if the subordinate clause precedes the main clause, then it is followed by a comma. If it comes after the main clause, then it is only set off by a comma if it is non-essential. This most usually applies to relative clauses.

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Number 4 is great...

If you're taking a 'history of grammar' class.

"for" is so rarely used that way it's not worth teaching, except when explaining 'literature'.


Well, it depends on if you're teaching possible grammatical usage or frequent grammatical usage. Regardless, it's certainly worth pointing out that using the subordinate conjunction "because" is much more frequent than using "for."
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