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joesp



Joined: 16 Jan 2008

PostPosted: Mon May 31, 2010 10:01 pm    Post subject: English question Reply with quote

is it correct to use WHOSE when the object receiving the action of the relative clause is an inanimate object, and not a person. I can understand for example "the book which is" and also "he is the guy whose girlfriend ..." but what about "the book whose ..." ..??

specifically, while proofreading, the sentence is
Quote:
The present invention also provides an apparatus for producing a boiled egg whose positions of the yolk and the albumen have been switched.


the option is the verbose
Quote:
The present invention also provides an apparatus for producing a boiled egg the positions of the yolk and the albumen of which have been switched.


is this just a stylistic issue or is it grammatically a no-no.


thanks,

Joseph 죠셉.


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edwardcatflap



Joined: 22 Mar 2009

PostPosted: Mon May 31, 2010 10:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It's perfectly acceptable in standard British English, don't know about American. Although that particular sentence sounds clumsy.

It sounds fine in something like this.

That's the car whose window was smashed
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joesp



Joined: 16 Jan 2008

PostPosted: Mon May 31, 2010 10:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

응 thanks. Dont' know why I can't get my head around it and WHOSE sounds clumsy, bugging me a lot this one is.
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Pyxis



Joined: 12 Oct 2008
Location: Daegu

PostPosted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 5:38 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah, it sounds a bit odd to me as well, but I can't say that is necessarily wrong. (An American here, if that helps.)

If I were to rewrite it so that it doesn't sound strange I'd probably go with "The present invention also provides an apparatus for producing a boiled egg wherein the positions of the yolk and the albumen have been switched."
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wuzza



Joined: 02 May 2003

PostPosted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 6:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I sympathize. Proofreading for the patent office is a real pain in the neck. I did it for a year until I couldn't take any more.
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