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raewon
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Posted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 2:03 am Post subject: grammar question - subject verb agreement |
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I have yet another subject/verb agreement question. Is the usage of "are"
correct in the following sentence? The sentence was taken from the Internet, but it's from a published source.
Likewise, a nurse or doctor who uses medical jargon, or a heavy metal fan who uses rock music slang, are going to encounter incomprehension when communicating with people outside their professional circles.
Thanks for your comments on this one. |
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edwardcatflap
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Posted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 4:06 am Post subject: |
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Same as before isn't it? Both are ok |
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raewon
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Posted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 4:10 am Post subject: |
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Thanks for your reply. I'm not really sure because I can't seem to justify
"are" using grammar rules. The use of "are" sounds OK to my ear, but when I think about subject/verb agreement rules ....I feel it has to be "is". |
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lifeinkorea
Joined: 24 Jan 2009 Location: somewhere in China
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Posted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 5:15 am Post subject: |
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The mistake seems to be with using either or not.
AM/ARE/IS going to VERB = future (I am going to go to Europe next week)
In this case we have "Likewise". Likewise, you are going to?
Doesn't make sense to me. "Likewise" is used for routines. Likewise, A does B, not A is going to do B.
So I would say:
"Likewise, a nurse or doctor who uses medical jargon, or a heavy metal fan who uses rock music slang, encounter incomprehension when communicating with people outside their professional circles."
It follows the same logic in using plural form "encounter" instead of "encounters". Perhaps, it's technically ok to use either so long as you keep the s for singular and drop it for plural. I prefer to omit the verb -ing part. |
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raewon
Joined: 16 Jun 2009
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Posted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 5:24 am Post subject: |
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Thanks for your reply.
Let's drop the "Likewise,". If I understood you correctly, then the following could be OK?
A nurse or doctor who uses medical jargon, or a heavy metal fan who uses rock music slang, are going to encounter incomprehension when communicating with people outside their professional circles.
Are the "are" and "their" supported by grammar rules, or do they mandate "is" and "his"? |
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blackjack

Joined: 04 Jan 2006 Location: anyang
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Posted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 6:00 am Post subject: |
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raewon wrote: |
Thanks for your reply.
Let's drop the "Likewise,". If I understood you correctly, then the following could be OK?
A nurse or doctor who uses medical jargon, or a heavy metal fan who uses rock music slang, are going to encounter incomprehension when communicating with people outside their professional circles.
Are the "are" and "their" supported by grammar rules, or do they mandate "is" and "his"? |
I would say is because it says A nurse or doctor ...
If it was re-phrased nurses or doctors then it would be are
the their issue. Isn't that just because they is often used instead of he/she |
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lifeinkorea
Joined: 24 Jan 2009 Location: somewhere in China
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Posted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 6:09 am Post subject: |
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Ok, but now you aren't comparing.
"Likewise" assumes you are comparing something with something else. Technically, it would be correct. However, I personally would drop the VERB -ing parts. |
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alljokingaside
Joined: 17 Feb 2010
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Posted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 7:37 am Post subject: Re: grammar question - subject verb agreement |
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raewon wrote: |
I have yet another subject/verb agreement question. Is the usage of "are"
correct in the following sentence? The sentence was taken from the Internet, but it's from a published source.
Likewise, a nurse or doctor who uses medical jargon, or a heavy metal fan who uses rock music slang, are going to encounter incomprehension when communicating with people outside their professional circles.
Thanks for your comments on this one. |
Should be "are"
Though "or" is employed by the state, the subjects aren't used simply to substitute each other; it isn't a either/or proposition. The nurse/doc/fanboys are examples from the category of "people who will be misunderstood." aka "They"
Also, the "their" in the prepositional phrase is a clue; try substituting that for a singular. |
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The Cosmic Hum

Joined: 09 May 2003 Location: Sonic Space
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Posted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 8:08 am Post subject: Re: grammar question - subject verb agreement |
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raewon wrote: |
I have yet another subject/verb agreement question. Is the usage of "are"
correct in the following sentence? The sentence was taken from the Internet, but it's from a published source.
Likewise, a nurse or doctor who uses medical jargon, or a heavy metal fan who uses rock music slang, are going to encounter incomprehension when communicating with people outside their professional circles.
Thanks for your comments on this one. |
...is/ are seems an awkward construction in both cases, as it allows for more than one interpretation...which may well be the intent of that construction.
Instead of 'are going to"
use...will encounter
The confusion ceases. |
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ontheway
Joined: 24 Aug 2005 Location: Somewhere under the rainbow...
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Posted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 11:21 am Post subject: |
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Correct sentence:
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Likewise, a nurse or doctor who uses medical jargon, or a heavy metal fan who uses rock music slang, is going to encounter incomprehension when communicating with people outside his or her professional circle. |
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kemek
Joined: 14 May 2010 Location: San Ramon, CA
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Posted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 12:13 pm Post subject: |
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If you drop part of the sentence and bring the subject and verb together, it makes sense with "is."
"A nurse or doctor ... is going to encounter incomprehension."
"A nurse or doctor are" is obviously wrong then.
That's the way I would try to parse out a tricky sentence. |
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murmanjake

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Posted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 12:51 pm Post subject: |
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ontheway wrote: |
Correct sentence:
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Likewise, a nurse or doctor who uses medical jargon, or a heavy metal fan who uses rock music slang, is going to encounter incomprehension when communicating with people outside his or her professional circle. |
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I agree.
Here's another sentence of the same format, different content. This is what helps me figure these things out.
Accordingly, a biker or a trucker who frequents brothels, or a junkie who shares needles, is going to risk contracting HIV when engaging in his or her licentious activities.
In the first part of the sentence it is written, "a biker or a trucker who frequents brothels" not "a biker or a trucker who frequent brothels."
If you insist on the second version(plural instead of singular) then you should insist on "are going to" for the next section. If the first version seems right(singular-frequents) then you should write "is going to." It's the same situation.
Can't wait to take the CELTA course and actually learn how to explain myself in proper grammatical terms.
EDIT:
I like the Cosmic Hum's suggestion. It neatly sidesteps all these messy agreement issues... |
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toph
Joined: 10 Jun 2010
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Posted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 3:13 pm Post subject: |
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Honestly, I believe IS would work in the sentence as well.
As you are using OR for your connector, it isn't a direct comparison. So if you compare the original with a new sentence that removes all filler words it will read as such:
Original:
Likewise, a nurse or doctor who uses medical jargon, or a heavy metal fan who uses rock music slang, are going to encounter incomprehension when communicating with people outside their professional circles.
This sentence becomes confusing from the start. Beginning with "likewise," it is hard to judge the rest of the sentence because the reader doesn't know what was "likewise-d".
New, edited sentence:
A doctor, or fan, IS going to encounter difficulty when communicating with people outside of their groups.
The tense, grammar, and plurality all remain the same in the edited sentence. The only thing that changes is the word "are" to "is."
Personally, I would change the idea of the sentence to a prediction and use "will." It seems more appropriate for the context of the sentence, but that's given that I don't know the rest of the story.
Anyway, hope that helps  |
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raewon
Joined: 16 Jun 2009
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Posted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 4:09 pm Post subject: |
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Wow, thanks for all the replies.
I'm curious about two things though:
The Cosmic Hum has always been spot on, so I'll start there:
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...is/ are seems an awkward construction in both cases, as it allows for more than one interpretation...which may well be the intent of that construction. Instead of 'are going to" use...will encounter The confusion ceases. |
That's an excellent idea. However, I have to wonder - what is the interpretation that could possibly support "are"?
And from toph:
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This sentence becomes confusing from the start. Beginning with "likewise," it is hard to judge the rest of the sentence because the reader doesn't know what was "likewise-d". |
Here is the sentence that comes before the one in question:
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These may cause dialect speakers communication problems once they are away from their own region and social context. Likewise, a nurse or doctor who uses medical jargon, or a heavy metal fan who uses rock music slang, are going to encounter incomprehension when communicating with people outside their professional circles. |
Thanks a lot. |
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toph
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Posted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 11:55 pm Post subject: |
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Okay...well, now that I know the previous sentence, it just becomes easier to read.
But even then, "are" should be corrected to "is."
Or the entire sentence can be changed to read as a prediction and use "will" instead of "are" or "is."
So, "...will encounter incomprehension..."
Hope this helps. |
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