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Khunopie

Joined: 21 Oct 2003 Location: Fucking, Austria (pronounced "Fooking")
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Posted: Sun May 30, 2004 7:16 am Post subject: How does this make you feel? |
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I'm good for you
Like red wine
Our kisses,
Like chilled red wine
In the heat of the evening
Of a sweltering summer day
You go down so smooth,
Like red wine
Water into wine,
Running down our bodies,
In between our lips
And legs
By candlelight
You touched me -
There
Sweet as wine
You've run from me,
Claimed you'd jumped
On the wagon
No more red wine
But your hands say yes,
Your eyes
And gently waiting body
Give you away
Pass over that goblet,
you say,
And let me drink
Your red wine
I'm so very good for you |
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crazykiwi

Joined: 07 Jun 2003 Location: new zealand via daejeon
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Posted: Sun May 30, 2004 8:04 pm Post subject: |
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| ......like i need a glass of red wine. did you write this for the board or for a special someone? hoe did it go down, or was it sent to you? |
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dogbert

Joined: 29 Jan 2003 Location: Killbox 90210
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Posted: Sun May 30, 2004 9:06 pm Post subject: |
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| crazykiwi wrote: |
| ......like i need a glass of red wine. did you write this for the board or for a special someone? hoe did it go down, or was it sent to you? |
Hopefully, the hoe went down. |
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peppermint

Joined: 13 May 2003 Location: traversing the minefields of caddishness.
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Posted: Sun May 30, 2004 9:10 pm Post subject: |
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It really distubed me actually- in combo with the current avatar.  |
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mindmetoo
Joined: 02 Feb 2004
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Posted: Sun May 30, 2004 9:22 pm Post subject: |
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| dogbert wrote: |
| crazykiwi wrote: |
| ......like i need a glass of red wine. did you write this for the board or for a special someone? hoe did it go down, or was it sent to you? |
Hopefully, the hoe went down. |
Ha  |
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crazykiwi

Joined: 07 Jun 2003 Location: new zealand via daejeon
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Posted: Mon May 31, 2004 9:46 pm Post subject: |
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woops! istill want replies on my questions, still cant figure out what it was on about, and yes, still want that glass of red wine, haha, "running between our bodies"! |
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rapier
Joined: 16 Feb 2003
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Posted: Mon May 31, 2004 10:01 pm Post subject: |
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Sounds a bit soppy.... forget the red wine and just grab hold of her...  |
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Khunopie

Joined: 21 Oct 2003 Location: Fucking, Austria (pronounced "Fooking")
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Posted: Tue Jun 01, 2004 12:31 am Post subject: |
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| I just found this while doing a google on chilling red wine. Frankly, it tugged at my heart and left me weeping for joy, pure joy! And then I puked and had a glass of cold red wine. That splotch on Bush's face looks like red wine stain, but I think that's just a coincidence. |
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Buff
Joined: 07 Apr 2004
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Posted: Wed Jun 02, 2004 4:29 am Post subject: |
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| It makes me feel all warm and squishy. |
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mysteriousdeltarays

Joined: 07 Feb 2003 Location: Food Pyramid Bldg. 5F, 77 Sunset Strip, Alphaville
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Posted: Thu Jun 03, 2004 7:29 am Post subject: |
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| I found it charming. It warmed my heart. What a wonderful poem! So evocative of my unsaid heartfelt...uh feelings. |
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