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alphalfa



Joined: 12 Feb 2003

PostPosted: Mon Aug 15, 2005 6:55 pm    Post subject: grading a story... Reply with quote

I asked my high school students to write a short story about something they saw or heard in the news. One of my students wrote about Muslims wearing a 'chador'. Here's part of her story: (beginning)

"I always wear a long scarf when I go out . I cannot take this off even
in the school or in a hot day...

I believe in Islam and have to keep its rules. We call this scarf a 'chador'
Muslim women have to wear chador. We cover our body from head to toe
with chador. People only can see our hands and face..... "


Besides some of the obvious grammar mistakes I think she did a pretty good job at writing the story. I gave her a B+. I pointed out to her the
above text and told her the confusion I (or any reader) had with it. The
story begins by telling us a chador is a scarf but later it tells us a chador covers 'our body from head to toe.. People only can see our hands and
face...' This passage describes a chador as a robe. Which is it? - a scarf or a robe I ask you. I thought a burqa was a head -covering scarf. No?


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yemanja



Joined: 29 Sep 2004

PostPosted: Mon Aug 15, 2005 7:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

If my student handed that in, I'd ask her/him who wrote it

Then again, your students may be much more creative than mine.
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ilovebdt



Joined: 03 Jun 2005
Location: Nr Seoul

PostPosted: Tue Aug 16, 2005 1:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

The chador is the head scarf. The dress part is called something else, but I don't know what.
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