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merlot
Joined: 04 Nov 2005
Location: I tried to contain myself but I escaped.
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 Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2006 4:07 am Post subject: I'm so damned bored... |
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EDIT: gosh awful "poem" deleted as to not cause anymore pain to myself or anyone else who might stumble across it.
Last edited by merlot on Fri Apr 28, 2006 11:58 pm; edited 1 time in total |
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visitor q
Joined: 11 Jan 2006
Location: The epitome of altruism - Oh Obese Newfoundler, I Am Going To Throttle Your Neck, Kaffir
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| Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2006 4:09 am Post subject: |
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| Welcome to the Incheon club - a city that is like a town, only with more taxis. |
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igotthisguitar
Joined: 08 Apr 2003
Location: South Korea (Permanent Vacation)
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| Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2006 4:36 am Post subject: Re: I'm so damned bored... |
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| merlot wrote: |
missed the last bus to Seoul
nothing to do in this town--not even bowl |
 If this is what i think you're reefer-ing to ... dude i hear you!
Groovy contribution btw. |
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merlot
Joined: 04 Nov 2005
Location: I tried to contain myself but I escaped.
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| Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2006 4:51 am Post subject: Re: I'm so damned bored... |
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| igotthisguitar wrote: |
| merlot wrote: |
missed the last bus to Seoul
nothing to do in this town--not even bowl |
If this is what i think you're reefer-ing to ... dude i hear you!
Groovy contribution btw. |
oh man, good pick-up on the unintended but delightful-sounding double entendre��flashback to jr. high: were banana peels just a myth??? |
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igotthisguitar
Joined: 08 Apr 2003
Location: South Korea (Permanent Vacation)
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| Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2006 5:06 am Post subject: Re: I'm so damned bored... |
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| merlot wrote: |
| oh man, good pick-up on the unintended but delightful-sounding double entendre��flashback to jr. high: were banana peels just a myth??? |
Hmmmmmm banana peels eh? Good question.
Maybe you should ask DONOVAN  |
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merlot
Joined: 04 Nov 2005
Location: I tried to contain myself but I escaped.
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| Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2006 5:17 am Post subject: Re: I'm so damned bored... |
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| igotthisguitar wrote: |
| merlot wrote: |
| oh man, good pick-up on the unintended but delightful-sounding double entendre��flashback to jr. high: were banana peels just a myth??? |
Hmmmmmm banana peels eh? Good question.
Maybe you should ask DONOVAN |
http://www.sniggle.net/banana.php
seems pretty involved, i think i'll just go to Mars with my boring friends and try to try to find a bowl of Special K instead |
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HapKi
Joined: 10 Dec 2004
Location: TALL BUILDING-SEOUL
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| Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2006 5:44 am Post subject: |
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| Your poem really flows, man, and so natural. I didn't even notice it rhymed until half-way through, at which point I stopped reading. |
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merlot
Joined: 04 Nov 2005
Location: I tried to contain myself but I escaped.
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| Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2006 10:17 am Post subject: |
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| HapKi wrote: |
| Your poem really flows, man, and so natural. I didn't even notice it rhymed until half-way through, at which point I stopped reading. |
an obvious case of banana envy |
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peemil
Joined: 09 Feb 2003
Location: Koowoompa
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| Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2006 2:46 pm Post subject: |
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| You take that back about Hite! |
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merlot
Joined: 04 Nov 2005
Location: I tried to contain myself but I escaped.
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| Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2006 4:58 pm Post subject: |
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| peemil wrote: |
| You take that back about Hite! |
Okay, okay. Hite is the absolutley best beer, hands down, for martial arts demonstrations.
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Xerxes
Joined: 10 Jan 2006
Location: Down a certain (rabbit) hole, apparently
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| Posted: Thu Apr 20, 2006 10:54 am Post subject: |
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Dude, I am bored. I got the spring blahs or sompthin'. I work too much, and I have a major case of "been there, done that." I'm content, but I'm nookin' pa more, know what I mean, Verne? I am in Seoul, too.
I really could go for a bowl, in more than a decade. |
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flotsam
Joined: 28 Mar 2006
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The big yellow joint,
The big yellow joint,
Take me down to the
Big yellow joint...
Nice work.
I especially like how you skipped rhyme in the final stanza. And if you tell me that is an official rhyme scheme(Etruscan Entrende Climactic Couplet Capping) I will disembowel myself forthwith. |
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captain kirk
Joined: 29 Jan 2003
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| Posted: Fri Apr 21, 2006 3:56 am Post subject: |
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| So gutterally honest about feeling totally blah. Aghh! I can see inside your brain! |
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eamo
Joined: 08 Mar 2003
Location: Shepherd's Bush, 1964.
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| Posted: Fri Apr 21, 2006 8:31 am Post subject: |
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I guess sometimes life hits a lull. Time is simply playing itself out without you making any contribution to it.
I wouldn't worry about that. If nothing bad is happing then its all good.
As the Confucious says, "Life is too long. Play video game". |
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Apple Scruff
Joined: 29 Oct 2003
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| Posted: Sat Apr 22, 2006 6:33 am Post subject: |
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| A crap poem. Get up on that sill. |
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