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merlot

Joined: 04 Nov 2005 Location: I tried to contain myself but I escaped.
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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 4:23 pm Post subject: Bad Haiku thread |
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Haiku is one of the most important forms of traditional Japanese poetry. Haiku is, today, a 17-syllable verse form consisting of three metrical units of 5, 7, and 5 syllables.
pee on Itawon
it�s fun for a night, but, uh
the morn reeks of fright |
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flotsam
Joined: 28 Mar 2006
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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 4:29 pm Post subject: |
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haiku does not I
think rhyme at all but there are
usage rules, innit?
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Hollywoodaction
Joined: 02 Jul 2004
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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 4:30 pm Post subject: |
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Do you know kimchi?
Do you like kimchi?
Why no like Kimchi?
Dokdo is Korea
Dokdo no Japan
Dokdo uridang
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merlot

Joined: 04 Nov 2005 Location: I tried to contain myself but I escaped.
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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 5:12 pm Post subject: |
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flotsam wrote: |
haiku does not I
think rhyme at all but there are
usage rules, innit? |
tell how edits are
possibly justifiable
on bad haiku page
so I rhyme haiku
yes sir, that's right I do, but
only here among do do |
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Tiberious aka Sparkles

Joined: 23 Jan 2003 Location: I'm one cool cat!
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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 5:57 pm Post subject: |
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NOT HAIKUS!!!!! |
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flotsam
Joined: 28 Mar 2006
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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 6:01 pm Post subject: |
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Tiberious aka Sparkles wrote: |
NOT HAIKUS!!!!! |
...my friend
Tiberious said tonight
what a fucking ass |
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venus
Joined: 25 Oct 2006 Location: Near Seoul
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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 6:04 pm Post subject: |
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We sit here alone
talking to those we can't see
voices in our heads |
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venus
Joined: 25 Oct 2006 Location: Near Seoul
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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 6:08 pm Post subject: |
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v d u buddies
projections severed from meat
no classes today
xxx
too much desk time I
should prepare for next week but
I can't be bothered
xxx
this is pointless fun
usually the best kind
better with soju |
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flotsam
Joined: 28 Mar 2006
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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 6:11 pm Post subject: |
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Venus, you're haiku
suck in keeping with this thread's
OP--duh, beyotch |
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venus
Joined: 25 Oct 2006 Location: Near Seoul
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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 6:14 pm Post subject: |
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FLOTSAM I don't care
You are a boring numbnuts
you should eat a d*ck |
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flotsam
Joined: 28 Mar 2006
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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 6:16 pm Post subject: |
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you see? that's better
it was really, really bad
wash your dirty mouth |
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venus
Joined: 25 Oct 2006 Location: Near Seoul
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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 6:17 pm Post subject: |
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Haiku is, today, a 17-syllable verse form consisting of three metrical units of 5, 7, and 5 syllables.
The metrical pattern of Haiku
Haiku-poems consist of respectively 5, 7 and 5 syllables in three units. In japanese, this convention is a must, but in english, which has variation in the length of syllables, this can sometimes be difficult.
I'm now a pedant
like flotsam and some others;
pointing out mistakes
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flotsam
Joined: 28 Mar 2006
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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 6:20 pm Post subject: |
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sad, another post-
er with issues who doesn't
understand wit^^ |
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venus
Joined: 25 Oct 2006 Location: Near Seoul
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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 6:25 pm Post subject: |
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wither is the wit?
it seems undetectable
in most of your posts
sarcasm is not
the only example of
how to be witty
I'm bored with haiku
time to daydream about some
hot sex adventures |
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flotsam
Joined: 28 Mar 2006
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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 6:31 pm Post subject: |
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again these are good
truly terrible indeed
nice work love god, less |
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