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gusthuber



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PostPosted: Fri May 11, 2012 10:05 am    Post subject: steroids Reply with quote
Steroids include nasty side effects.

Is the verb `include� acceptable or a serious mistake?

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askeladd



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PostPosted: Sat May 12, 2012 2:24 am    Post subject: Re: steroids Reply with quote
gusthuber wrote:
Steroids include nasty side effects.

Is the verb `include� acceptable or a serious mistake?

Please comment


I would alter the sentence somehow; perhaps:

The drawbacks of steroids include nasty side effects.

or:

Steroids have nasty side effects.

Hope this helps Wink
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