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nancybig
Joined: 16 Jul 2004
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Location: hong kong
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 Posted: Sat Jul 17, 2004 4:56 pm Post subject: HONG KONG GAL |
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Hey i am nancy from Hong Kong , , if all of you have chance go to my country, i can take you go to everywhere ,eventhrough
hk is guite small portion but you can find yammy food and
cheaper things in here .
nice to see you soon. bye
nancy
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hey , my call name is nancy , i would
like learn more english in here , if any
wrong get from my words,please let me know,thanks |
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walkingirl
Joined: 15 Jul 2004
Posts: 18
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| Posted: Tue Jul 20, 2004 9:30 pm Post subject: wow I am longing for a visit to HongKong |
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Hi Nancy
Thank you for your introduction about the small lovely place HONG KONG.
I am a girl from the main land, I am longing for a visit to Hong Kong.
LOVELY PLACE AND LOVELY PEOPOE!
My dream may come true soon!  |
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walkingirl
Joined: 15 Jul 2004
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| Posted: Tue Jul 20, 2004 9:46 pm Post subject: some opions about your article |
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Hi Nancy, good writing.
However, there are some mistakes.
1 You were a little careless.-----(-Hey i am nancy from Hong Kong )
i should be capital.
2( if all of you have chance go to my country if all of you have chance go to my country, i can take you go to everywhere ,eventhrough
hk is guite small portion but you can find yammy food and
cheaper things in here . )( i would
like learn more english in here , if any
wrong get from my words,please let me know,thanks )
, the sentence in backet should be IF ALL OF YOU HAVE CHANCE TO GO TO MY COUNTRY , I CAN TAKE YOU TO EVERYWHERE . THOUGH HK IS A QUITE SMALL PORT ION, YOU CAN FIND YAMMY FOOD AND CHEAP THINGS IN HERE .
I 'd like to learn more English ... if I have made some mistakes in my lines...
3 (my call name is nancy ) CALL is not an adjective.
The paragraphs above are only my opinions. However, I am still not good in English.
I hope that would be of help.
Yours walkingirl  |
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alex_007
Joined: 27 Aug 2003
Posts: 93
Location: Swansea
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| Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2004 11:07 pm Post subject: " Nice to know you " |
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hey ! Nancy, how old are you  ?
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mikewolf
Joined: 23 Jul 2004
Posts: 10
Location: Singapore
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| Posted: Sat Jul 24, 2004 12:29 am Post subject: |
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Hi,Nanncy.
You can call me Mike .I'm come from mainland.
Now I'm studying in Singapore.In term of size,Singapore is also small.If you have chance to visit to Singapore,I will be a good guide for you.
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