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ratchanee
Joined: 29 Apr 2006
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 Posted: Sun Apr 30, 2006 12:22 am Post subject: An agriculture in Thailand.( Help me writing essay,plz) |
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Thailand is a land of agriculture because Thailand has a good natural resources, fertile land and ideal growing.Today ,Thailandis an exporter of traditionnal products which are competitive in term of priceand qualitity.
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Lorikeet
Joined: 08 Oct 2005
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Location: San Francisco
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| Posted: Sun Apr 30, 2006 7:50 am Post subject: Re: An agriculture in Thailand.( Help me writing essay,plz) |
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| ratchanee wrote: |
Thailand is a land of agriculture because Thailand has a good natural resources, fertile land and ideal growing.Today ,Thailandis an exporter of traditionnal products which are competitive in term of priceand qualitity.
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You said, "a good natural resources" but if you want to have "resources" plural, there is no need for an "a".
You said, "ideal growing" but in this case, it would be better to use "growing" as an adjective and add a noun to make "ideal growing conditions."
You can also check your spelling on "traditionnal" and "qualitity."
Otherwise it was very well done. |
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