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Joined: 09 Mar 2003 Posts: 2111 Location: New Jersey, US
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Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 3:31 pm Post subject: |
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Your sentence is fine, TCC. It is neither better nor worse than the original, but it is slighly different, in my opinion.
Adding "too" at the end of the sentence gives it (watching the moon) a little more emphasis, a little more importance. The sentence is fine without "too," but then watching the moon seems not quite as important. Again, that's just my opinion, but I hope it helps. |
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