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Crisi
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 Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2007 5:46 am Post subject: the teenagers |
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Please, could you tell me if there is a comma after 'nowadays' and if the article before teenagers is acceptable.
Nowadays the teenagers tend to imitate their idols of pop or TV, and so, the young people's attempt to become independent ends in dependence of the commercial clothing industry.
Thank you very much for your assistance. |
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Crisi
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| Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2007 5:49 am Post subject: ups... |
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..dependence on the commercial ...
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2006
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| Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2007 9:19 pm Post subject: |
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I think a comma after "nowadays" is optional.
Don't use "the" before "teenagers". |
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Crisi
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| Posted: Wed Jan 03, 2007 5:39 am Post subject: |
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Thank you 2006! or is it now 2007?
A Happy New Year to you anyway! |
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