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[hanygeorge38]

Dear Bud,

How are you hope all is well with you would please tell me your
comments on the following text which i translated from my native
language into english



Please find hereunder free translation of the Port Authority
internal resolution no (27) dated 2nd of January '2000

Article No.1
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The managerial resolution number 8 in regard to defining the official
working days has been modified as follows :

- Official working days to start on Sundays and end on Thursdays
whereas Fridays and Saturdays are considered to be weekends
(official holidays)


Article No. 2
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Working on Fridays and Saturdays to continue normally with only 25%
of the working power divided into shifts.



Thanks In advance bud

Hany
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hany

[bud]

Hi Hany,

I'm fine, thanks.

It looks good to me. The only comments I have are:

1. Type the year 2000 without the apostrophe (2000, not '2000).

2. Elsewhere in this document, is the staffing for a typical day referred to as "the working power?" If so, then what you have is fine. (I've never heard that phrase before.) If not, then I would replace "the working power" with "the staff."

Very nice job, Hany!