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RedRose
Joined: 21 May 2004
Posts: 2735
Location: GuangZhou, China
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 Posted: Thu Oct 20, 2005 6:23 am Post subject: If I were a guy.... |
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Here is a board for English-learning. I wanna improve my English by writing some poem. if my poem is awful, please lemme know! thanks!
I have read a lot of love poems by some guys. I found that men always have a hard time to write love poems. therefor, I thought to myself:"what if I were a guy? I would write very amazing poems for girls!"
I tried to write a poem, and it was based on a false precondition: if I were a guy who was chasing a girl... here is the poem!
To a lovely girl!
I have your picture
in my hands and heart
you look great in winter clothes
But I am imagining...
what if all these clothes are off....?
a imagination in the bottom of my heart
a naked girl
great shape
bright eyes!
Maybe more...
I hate when I have such a thought!
But your phote always reminds me of your body!
Aromatic body...
You make everything smell sexy!
I am getting into my coma,
you brought me love craziness
you are my sexy angel with some drugs
I want the coma forever!
I'd rather die of the coma you gave me
more than live without you around
Tell me where I can find you?
I would reserve a hotel for us
and I would prepare for some bath stuff
Believe me! |
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elba
Joined: 29 Jul 2005
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Location: mexico
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| Posted: Sat Oct 22, 2005 3:13 pm Post subject: |
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Hey Redy you writte an excellent poem!, �Belive me! I�m proud of my friend because you not also writte a love poem, but also a funny and erotic poem, and you didn�t need to writte cheap words.
Only one thing: What does mean "coma"?
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RedRose
Joined: 21 May 2004
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Location: GuangZhou, China
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| Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 3:31 am Post subject: |
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| elba wrote: |
Hey Redy you writte an excellent poem!, �Belive me! I�m proud of my friend because you not also writte a love poem, but also a funny and erotic poem, and you didn�t need to writte cheap words.
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wow!! thanks for the compliments!!
| elba wrote: |
| Only one thing: What does mean "coma"? |
Coma: A state of deep, often prolonged unconsciousness, usually the result of injury, disease, or poison, in which an individual is incapable of sensing or responding to external stimuli and internal needs. |
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