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eda
Joined: 01 Apr 2005
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Location: Ankara/Turkey
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 Posted: Sat Oct 29, 2005 2:38 am Post subject: My poem!! |
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E verytime I log in
S ome replies are written
L ooking and reading them is my pleasure
C an any ESL site be better?
A pplauses for both moderators and users
F or this great environment
E da bows for you!!
haha i hope you liked my acrostic poem.
I am looking forward to read your opinions  
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RedRose
Joined: 21 May 2004
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Location: GuangZhou, China
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| Posted: Sat Oct 29, 2005 3:12 am Post subject: Re: My poem!! |
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| eda wrote: |
E verytime I log in
S ome replies are written
L ooking and reading them is my pleasure
C an any ESL site be better?
A pplauses for both moderators and users
F or this great environment
E da bows for you!!
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Great poem!! eda, good job!
At least it's greater than my poems |
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eda
Joined: 01 Apr 2005
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| Posted: Sat Oct 29, 2005 3:18 am Post subject: |
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thanks.
i am glad that you-the greatest poem in eslcafe- liked it!
regards 
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admiral
Joined: 17 Sep 2005
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| Posted: Sat Oct 29, 2005 4:47 am Post subject: |
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Yes! Such a nice poem.
I really envy you that you can write something with just the idea in the mind.
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RedRose
Joined: 21 May 2004
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| Posted: Sat Oct 29, 2005 4:49 am Post subject: |
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| I have to practice more so as to keep up with eda and Admiral! |
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Bob S.
Joined: 29 Apr 2004
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| Posted: Mon Oct 31, 2005 10:05 am Post subject: |
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| Very clever! Good job. |
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Timurko
Joined: 26 Sep 2005
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| Posted: Mon Oct 31, 2005 11:31 pm Post subject: |
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| I like it. I'm also a poet and may be I'll translate my poems into English |
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RedRose
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| Posted: Mon Oct 31, 2005 11:33 pm Post subject: |
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| Timurko wrote: |
| I like it. I'm also a poet and may be I'll translate my poems into English |
Do it!!
I can't wait to read your poems!! |
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Timurko
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| Posted: Mon Oct 31, 2005 11:45 pm Post subject: |
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Do it!!
I can't wait to read your poems!! |
I think my poems are not so good, to wait for them so impationtly |
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eda
Joined: 01 Apr 2005
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| Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2005 1:42 am Post subject: |
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Hi all!
i have just log in and read your replies.wowww i am so happy.thanks
i am really glad that you liked it.Now I am trying to write another poem.This time it will be about cats!
p.s Timurko please do it.i realyy wonder your poems too.i think every thing that was worked on it deserve to be seen,read by others.( i hope you understood my bad sentence )Go ahead!
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RedRose
Joined: 21 May 2004
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| Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2005 3:42 am Post subject: |
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just do it! here we can write poems, novels, anything!  |
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Cristi
Joined: 26 Aug 2005
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| Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2005 7:28 am Post subject: |
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GO POETS, GO POETS, GOOOO!!!!!!  
POEMS ARE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!
*no coment*
Nice and original poem, Eda!!! Keep going!
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eda
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| Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2005 9:09 am Post subject: |
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haha thanks a lot Cristi!
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Snake777
Joined: 05 Nov 2005
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| Posted: Sat Nov 05, 2005 2:09 pm Post subject: |
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wow Eda ! U re doing a great job 
Ur poem is good >_< ESL Cafe hahah nice |
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eda
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| Posted: Sun Nov 06, 2005 8:27 am Post subject: hi again |
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ZODIAC
Sagitarius is my horoscope
Some says we are hard to cope.
We are the sign of abundance and happiness
Well,i know we are a bit tactless!
Freedom and honesty are what we seek
And we like living in peak
Hi all!
How is my new poem dedicated to the Sagitarius ?I hope you enjoyed it
Greets |
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