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admiral · Joined: 17 Sep 2005 Posts: 546

When we met us the first time,
I saw the reason it�s still the same,
but I didn�t tell you this,
I didn�t want me to miss.

The things I see are still the same,
but I noticed it was still a dream.
More and more mails from you I got,
everything I knew were only a thought.

And as the time went along the line,
and each time I got your sign,
after the second of your faint,
all these feelings came up again.

Yes, angel,
I have to admit that I have had a crush on you,
since the time you said to me, it doesn�t matter.

Do you still know the words,
that we should still stay as friends?
I only say about me, cause,
I know, that I can�t force

I told you, because of him,
I didn�t care how it would seem,
wherever you go, whatever you do,
that I will always be there for you.

I really don�t hope anything behind,
I can only tell you what�s to my mind,
every time I blink at your face,
that I see the paradise in your eyes.

RedRose · Joined: 21 May 2004 Posts: 2735 Location: GuangZhou, China

Admiral, your poem is far more gorgeous than mine.

Boy, can you teach me how to write porm well? with your teaching, I guess my poem-writing will be improved in the future.

Now I am conceiving a new poem Wink