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RedRose · Joined: 21 May 2004 Posts: 2735 Location: GuangZhou, China

Guys, As you well know, we are gonna elect the most excellent poet on Dave's. However, despite my instigation, only few people wrote poems and participated in our election. what a pity! Twisted Evil

they are RedRose, Admiral, eda.

Anyway, let's vote for whom we regard as the best poem! firstly, please take a look at their work!

1.this is eda's work! Her's poem is ZODIAC
click eda's work

2. This is Admiral's work! this spring she told me, it didn't matter.
click Admiral's work

3.This is RedRose's work! if I were a guy...
click RedRose's work

Guys! cast your vote!!

RedRose · Joined: 21 May 2004 Posts: 2735 Location: GuangZhou, China

I am hesitating!! I don't know who to vote for! eda or Admiral? in my eyes, Both are great! my daughter just gave me a suggestion:"Mum, if you don't know who vote for, why not throw a coin as I do everytime when I come to such a dilemma?"

I did! as a result of throwing coin, eda deserved my vote! Laughing

admiral · Joined: 17 Sep 2005 Posts: 546

However, I don't like such a thing.
I don't know how others will think, but I don't write my poems for general elections, because my purpose is not to let others know about my poem.
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asterix · Joined: 26 Jan 2003 Posts: 1654

The trout hesitates
Beneath the rock, wondering
If the fly is real.

admiral · Joined: 17 Sep 2005 Posts: 546

exactly

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RedRose · Joined: 21 May 2004 Posts: 2735 Location: GuangZhou, China

It seems that I made the worst poet on Dave Laughing

Snake777 · Posted: Fri Nov 11, 2005 7:06 am Post subject:

Awww come on Redrose ... ur poem is not that bad .. but we have to choose the best one right ?! Yours is the worst in the best hahah soo cheer up =]
At least u can do poem , i cant ! But i'll try ^__^ i really do want but ... hummnn Confused

RedRose · Joined: 21 May 2004 Posts: 2735 Location: GuangZhou, China

that's ok! I am glad that you guys voted for Admiral and eda. Both are great. Very Happy

eda · Joined: 01 Apr 2005 Posts: 379 Location: Ankara/Turkey

i wont vote coz both admiral and RedRose are great. Very Happy

I really like you my friends!!
I think all of us did such a great thing by sharing them...
Regards
Cool

eda · Joined: 01 Apr 2005 Posts: 379 Location: Ankara/Turkey

[quote="RedRose"]I am hesitating!! I don't know who to vote for! eda or Admiral? in my eyes, Both are great! my daughter just gave me a suggestion:"Mum, if you don't know who vote for, why not throw a coin as I do everytime when I come to such a dilemma?"

I did! as a result of throwing coin, eda deserved my vote! Laughing

[/quote]

i forgot to add to my Zodiac poem that Sagitaurious people are lucky Razz

admiral · Joined: 17 Sep 2005 Posts: 546

I hate it to stand there for voting.
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asterix · Joined: 26 Jan 2003 Posts: 1654

It doesn't matter who is the best.
If you have a best then there is a worst, and that's not the idea.
The thing about poetry is that it is a way to express something the poet cares about.
I suspect many of us like to write poetry, but are a bit shy about putting it out there for others to see.
Thank you Rose, Admiral, eda for being brave enough.

Snake777 · Posted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 11:10 am Post subject: