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[Iwana]

Dear teachers

Here are quoted from the sentences originally written in Japanese.
I tried putting them into English.

I would like you to look over if there are any mistakes
and correct them to make them perfect and cool.

"If you always smile without getting depressed,
you deserve a copper medal.
If you always smile after getting over depression,
you deserve a silver medal.
If you always smile even in depression,
you deserve a gold medal."

I need your help.
Thank you very much.

Sincerely,

Iwana