Yukineko
Joined: 08 Nov 2005 Posts: 64
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Posted: Mon Nov 14, 2005 5:02 pm Post subject: Please correct my composition. |
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Hello teachers. I'm studying English writing, and could you help me with my question? Which do you think is the best among the following sentences?
1. A library is a room or building where you can read or borrow some books, magazines, and videos.
2. A library is a room or building where you can read some books, magazines, and videos, and where you can borrow them.
3. A library is a room or building in which you can read some books, magazines, and videos, and from which you can borrow them.
4. A library is a room or building where you can read some books, magazines, and videos, and from which you can borrow them.
I guess #4 is the best, but are the other sentences gramatically acceptable?
Thank you in advance.
Yukineko. |
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