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river1974



Joined: 20 May 2003
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Location: Taiwan

PostPosted: Wed Dec 28, 2005 11:27 pm    Post subject: sentence check Reply with quote

Dear teachers:

Please kindly bear us for the possible inconvenience caused by this somewhat late report.

Is there anything wrong with the above?

Thanks.
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iitimone7



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Location: Indiana, USA

PostPosted: Thu Dec 29, 2005 7:46 am    Post subject: bear with us Reply with quote

river...i think you were trying to say bear with us.

a better sentence would be -

Please bear with me until I turn in this report.
(it's understood that the report is late).

it's not necessary to use so many words - if you can make a shorter sentence and be understood, it's better to do it that way than to make your sentence too long. not only is it more difficult for someone to say, but the listener may have all ready run out of patience to listen.

iitimone7
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river1974



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PostPosted: Thu Dec 29, 2005 6:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks for your suggestion! Laughing
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LucentShade



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PostPosted: Sat Dec 31, 2005 12:24 am    Post subject: Re: bear with us Reply with quote

iitimone7 wrote:
but the listener may have [all ready] run out of patience to listen.


*already, not "all ready"

Sorry, ordinarily I wouldn't make corrections like this on a message board, but since many learners may take native speaker language as gospel, I feel this is in their interests.
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