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river1974
Joined: 20 May 2003 Posts: 525 Location: Taiwan
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Posted: Wed Dec 28, 2005 11:27 pm Post subject: sentence check |
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Dear teachers:
Please kindly bear us for the possible inconvenience caused by this somewhat late report.
Is there anything wrong with the above?
Thanks. |
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iitimone7
Joined: 09 Aug 2005 Posts: 400 Location: Indiana, USA
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Posted: Thu Dec 29, 2005 7:46 am Post subject: bear with us |
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river...i think you were trying to say bear with us.
a better sentence would be -
Please bear with me until I turn in this report.
(it's understood that the report is late).
it's not necessary to use so many words - if you can make a shorter sentence and be understood, it's better to do it that way than to make your sentence too long. not only is it more difficult for someone to say, but the listener may have all ready run out of patience to listen.
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river1974
Joined: 20 May 2003 Posts: 525 Location: Taiwan
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Posted: Thu Dec 29, 2005 6:12 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks for your suggestion!  |
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LucentShade
Joined: 30 Dec 2003 Posts: 542 Location: Nebraska, USA
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Posted: Sat Dec 31, 2005 12:24 am Post subject: Re: bear with us |
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| iitimone7 wrote: |
but the listener may have [all ready] run out of patience to listen.
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*already, not "all ready"
Sorry, ordinarily I wouldn't make corrections like this on a message board, but since many learners may take native speaker language as gospel, I feel this is in their interests. |
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