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fw
Joined: 12 Oct 2005 Posts: 361
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Posted: Tue Jan 10, 2006 5:56 pm Post subject: Is it possible?(2) |
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Hello everyone.
I understand you can rewrite the following sentence into sentence #1. Is it possible then to rewrite the same sentence into sentence #2?
�As I had been there before, I found the shop at once.�
1. Having there before, I found the shop at once.
2. Being there before, I found the shop at once.
Best regards,
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Lorikeet

Joined: 08 Oct 2005 Posts: 1877 Location: San Francisco
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Posted: Wed Jan 11, 2006 2:31 am Post subject: Re: Is it possible?(2) |
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| fw wrote: |
Hello everyone.
I understand you can rewrite the following sentence into sentence #1. Is it possible then to rewrite the same sentence into sentence #2?
�As I had been there before, I found the shop at once.�
1. Having there before, I found the shop at once.
2. Being there before, I found the shop at once.
Best regards,
fw |
Number 1 is not correct. It should be:
Having been there before, I found the shop at once.
That would be my preferred choice. |
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ebb

Joined: 12 Jan 2006 Posts: 87 Location: USA
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Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2006 9:55 am Post subject: |
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As I had been there before, I found the shop at once.�
1. Having there before, I found the shop at once.
2. Being there before, I found the shop at once.
2 is in the wrong tense. "I found" is in the past tense, so you can immediately see that "being there" can't be correct, since your (past) physical presence in the shop must have occurred prior to your "finding it at once", which quick-finding itself took place in the past.
1 is elegant once you correct it to include the "been" between "having" and "there" -- more direct and colloquial, but less elegant, is the simple "I had been there before, so I found the shop at once." This also might help you sort out the correct tenses....at the cost of the elegance found in Lori's rewrite.... imho.
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