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Outsider
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 Posted: Thu Mar 09, 2006 6:21 am Post subject: natual peanut butter |
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Could one of you teachers please read and correct my paragraph below?
"I bought a can of natural peanut butter, of which the top layer is oil. I have to stir it before I spread it on my bread. The label didn't specify it, but I wonder whether or not I should keep the peanut butter in the frige after opening it. If I keep it in the frige, the oil becomes kind of solid and will be hard to mix with the rest later when I want to use it; if I leave it out of frige I fear it may be spoiled. Should I keep it in the frige?" |
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JuanValdez
Joined: 12 Nov 2005
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Location: Somewhere in Middle America
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| Posted: Sun Mar 12, 2006 7:19 am Post subject: Re: natual peanut butter |
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| Outsider wrote: |
Could one of you teachers please read and correct my paragraph below?
"I bought a can of natural peanut butter, of which the top layer is oil. I have to stir it before I spread it on my bread. The label didn't specify it, but I wonder whether or not I should keep the peanut butter in the frige after opening it. If I keep it in the frige, the oil becomes kind of solid and will be hard to mix with the rest later when I want to use it; if I leave it out of frige I fear it may be spoiled. Should I keep it in the frige?" |
The paragraph is fine, but we spell it "fridge". |
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Outsider
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| Posted: Sun Mar 12, 2006 3:55 pm Post subject: |
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| I appreciate it, Juan. |
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