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koko~
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 Posted: Wed Mar 29, 2006 12:42 pm Post subject: help and check |
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please help me check my grammar
Many people think the language is only one kind of communicable tool, but we should not neglect it because its power may affect us to live on each detail. Recently, there are a lot of people like to immigrate to other countries, yet the language becomes their first barrier. Because the language is different, they always get trouble in their real life. Thus, the language is power that affects the social life, freedom, and occupation.
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LucentShade
Joined: 30 Dec 2003
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Location: Nebraska, USA
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| Posted: Wed Mar 29, 2006 2:10 pm Post subject: Re: help and check |
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| koko~ wrote: |
please help me check my grammar
Many people think language is only one tool of communication, but we should not neglect it because its power may affect every detail of our lives. Recently, there are a lot of people who / that like to immigrate to other countries, yet the language becomes their first barrier. Because the language is different, they always have trouble in their lives. Thus, language is a power that affects the social life, freedom, and occupation.
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*"communicable" means "able to be shared or transmitted," and is a word mainly used with diseases or infections
That's what I would change. If you have any questions about why I changed anything, feel free to post them here. |
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koko~
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| Posted: Wed Mar 29, 2006 2:29 pm Post subject: |
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thank you very much for your help  |
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