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wslyx



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PostPosted: Sun May 14, 2006 8:55 pm    Post subject: Important family Reply with quote

Dear teachers, please help to ckeak the grammar and sentence.......
thank you!!!!!!!!
Having family is important for success because family teaches us unconditional love and strong values in life. Parents provide guidance for us. they help us to develop positive social relationships that can provide support when things go wrong. Also, parents help us learn to deal woth emotions, and celebrate and discuss successes. And they help us learn from failures. We look to adults to evaluate their behavior and skills. When parents teach that good things for us, we achieve successeasy. That will help us many successes. So family is very important for us to successes
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PostPosted: Sun May 14, 2006 10:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Maybe

A family is important for success because it teaches us unconditional love and strong values for life. Parents provide guidance for us. They help us to develop our positive social relationships that can provide support when things go wrong. Also, parents help us to deal with emotional problems. Moreover, they help us to learn from our failures. We watch adults to learn their behaviors and skills. When parents teach us good things, we will achieve our success. Therefore a family is very important for us to succeed
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