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wslyx
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 Posted: Sat May 13, 2006 5:44 am Post subject: Good healty |
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Dear teacher, please help me to check the grammar and sentence....
Thank you !!!!!!
Good healty is one way of being successful because you live longer when your body is in good condition. When you are healty, you have more energy to do anything plus you have no stress in worrying about any illness. The opposite is being unhealthy. You have no energy for anything like working or exercising your body suffers beacause it is weak and might have some illness like heart condition or being over weight. This will not give you a successful life.
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Mister Micawber
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Good health is one way of being successful, because you live longer when your body is in good condition. When you are healthy, you have more energy and less stress in worrying about illnesses. When you are unhealthy, you have no energy for work or exercise; your body suffers because it is weak and may develop infirmities like a heart condition or obesity. This will not permit you a successful life.
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