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[wslyx]

Dear teacher, please help me to check the grammar and sentence....
Thank you !!!!!!

No doubt everyone wishes to be successful in anything. But when explaining the word success; it can be hard. Everyone has their own definition and they are all correct. My personal definitionfor being successful has two components which are family and good healty.
Good healty is one way of being successful because you live longer when your body is in good condition. When you are healty, you have more energy to do anything plus you have no stress in worrying about any illness. The opposite is being unhealthy. You have no energy for anything like working or exercising your body suffers beacause it is weak and might have some illness like heart condition or being over weight. This will not give you a successful life.
Having family is important for success because family teaches us unconditional love and strong values in life. Parents provide guidance for us. they help us to develop positive social relationships that can provide support when things go wrong. Also, parents help us learn to deal woth emotions, and celebrate and discuss successes. And they help us learn from failures. We look to adults to evaluate their behavior and skills. When parents teach that good things for us, we achieve successeasy. That will help us many successes. So family is very important for us to successes.
In the end, I think successful people must learn what goes wrong and why, and make necessary adjustment and try again.
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wslyx