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[welkins2139]

It was a monthly meeting. A doctor and a nurse stood in the middle of the crowded of the mental patients. The docotor gave a long speech that some patients were in good progress. Then he mentioned a new patient. While he was reading the new patient's profile, he seemed interesting it. When he called him, the new patient quickly replied. Every meeting was the same. It filled up with all kind of the discussions that what the patients did in the ward. The nurse with the big red lips interrupted the doctor, telling him to finish up his spiel. The nurse asked each patient to tell a secret. After twenty minutes, no patient would volunter first. She pulled out the log book and called the first patient she saw. The log book recorded the patients' secrets. Immeaditely the first patient confessed his secret. Another did the same, so did the rest.

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[Mister Micawber]

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