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welkins2139
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 2:01 am Post subject: proof reading |
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He stood at the desk, hearing each trustee's complain. Finally Alan gave in after being overwhelmed by the board of the director. He asked his deputy to take over and walked out the meeting. His head were down while he was walking past the sidetrack cafe. He felt for the first time that he had been defeated.
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Mister Micawber

Joined: 23 Mar 2006 Posts: 774 Location: Yokohama
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 4:42 am Post subject: |
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I have already fixed this for you at ANOTHER SITE.
. _________________ "I really do not know that anything has ever been more exciting than diagramming sentences." � Gertrude Stein
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Canadian-American who teaches English for a living at Mr Micawber's |
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welkins2139
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 5:13 am Post subject: |
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Thank you very much. |
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