welkins2139
Joined: 29 Mar 2006 Posts: 252
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Posted: Thu May 25, 2006 10:08 am Post subject: sentence mistake #2 |
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Are these sentences correct ? If not, would you correct them ?
#1 Her high heels stood firmly against the planks while she closed tighly in her hands on the red ropes above her wrist, looking over other maginficent builidgs in the east.
#2 Even though we are one of the most liberal nations in the world, we still see some stigma news on race, classware, religion, etc.
#3 She turned the same music which was playing over and over again because there was no music allowed from the radio in this hospital.
#4 Mr Murry had won the case for the unlawful dismissal.
#5 He sat down and began to think of his new column topic, as usual, holding his chin with two fingers.
# 6 Harding said to him that you would get used to the loud music as if you lived near the falls, later, you would not feel be bothered after a long, long time.
Thank you for helping ! |
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