welkins2139
Joined: 29 Mar 2006 Posts: 252
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Posted: Thu Jun 01, 2006 8:40 pm Post subject: need an eye to find out my errors |
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1 Eddie's heart was roaring in the meeting.
#2 The doctor and Eddie would have a carnival for next week.
#3 The doctor gave suggestion about that the music was too loud for everyone so he wanted the patients who did not want to listen to go to another room.
#4 The nurse was felt beaten but she remained calm and confident.
#5 The patients were glad to see Eddie that dominated the meeting.
#6 They knew he would lose to the nurse eventually.
#7 No one had ever beaten her in the ward.
#8 Eddie's never had anybody supports him what he said.
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