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welkins2139
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 Posted: Tue Jun 20, 2006 6:30 pm Post subject: riding/watching |
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Riding the skyfari was a thrilled experience. Watching the zoo from east to west was spectaular.
Are they OK?
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Anuradha Chepur
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| Posted: Wed Jun 21, 2006 12:47 am Post subject: |
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| Riding the safari was a thrilling experience. Watching the zoo from east to west was spectacular. |
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LucentShade
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Location: Nebraska, USA
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| Posted: Wed Jun 21, 2006 1:03 am Post subject: |
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| I'd say "seeing the zoo" -- is "skyfari" some kind of safari in a plane? If so, then I guess "skyfari" is correct. |
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welkins2139
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| Posted: Wed Jun 21, 2006 4:47 am Post subject: |
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Thank you all,
Why is " thrilled" wrong in the setence? |
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CP
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| Posted: Wed Jun 21, 2006 6:36 am Post subject: |
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| "Thrilled" is wrong in the sentence because then it means that the experience was thrilled, when what you want to say is that the people were thrilled by the experience of riding the Skyfari. Therefore, the experience was thrilling to the people. |
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