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welkins2139
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 Posted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 4:21 pm Post subject: influence/affected |
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Not many movies that I've seen can influence me. The movie I saw that really affected me a lot since then.
Is this sentence OK?
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CP
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First sentence OK. Second sentence needs work. You might try:
"The movie that I just saw really affected me."
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