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BMO
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 Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 8:03 pm Post subject: Edit Samuel's English |
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I met a friend who was from South Africa, he frequently bring many his different girlfriends to let me know them. One day I didn�t know which one was his girlfriend. And I asked him what number of your girl friend for this one, could you tell me?
Would you please edit this paragraph?
Thanks.
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CP
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| Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 9:52 pm Post subject: |
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Try this:
I have a friend from South Africa. He has many girlfriends, and he brings them to my place so I can meet them. One day he brought a girl over, and I said to him, "So tell me: What number is this one?"
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BMO
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| Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 12:28 pm Post subject: |
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Thank you so much, it is much better.
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