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[koko~]

From the past to present, my life is almost the same, and days are ordinary. Nevertheless, when I was in high school, there was a teacher who taught me a lot of things and changed my mind during the high school days. She was a amiable and humorous person. She had an excellence of education and she did many jobs in her life. She also was a knowledgeable person who knew a lot of our society. Therefore, she taught me how to choose friend, to read and choose job.



are those setences correct? can someone help? please....

[CP]

My editing:

From the past to the present, my life has been almost unchanged, and most days are just ordinary. Nevertheless, when I was in high school, there was a teacher who taught me a lot of things and changed me for the better. She was an amiable and humorous person. She had an excellent education, and she had held many jobs in her life before becoming a teacher. She was very knowledgeable about our society. Therefore, she taught me what to read, how to choose friends, and how to choose a job.

You might also add a closing word or two, such as, Miss Winters was truly my life teacher.
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