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[Swim4life]

Please let me know if the following is grammatically correct and natural. Thanks a million!

"Please advise who I�m supposed to make the invoice out to and to whose attention."

[Swim4life]

Any ideas anyone? Thanks.

[lotus]

Hi Swim4life,

Try:

Please advise as to whom I should make the invoice out to.

There are many other ways to say it.


--lotus

[Swim4life]

Thanks Lotus.

Well, what I�m trying to say is that I will send the invoice to my client (native English speaker) by snail mail, and I�m asking my client who I should make/write the invoice out to (company name), and for whose attention (the person who would receive the invoice). At this point, can I say �Please advise who I should make the invoice out to and for whose attention.�?

It�s the sentence I would use frequently in my business mail. Could someone please help me out? Thanks a billion!

[lotus]

Hi Swim4life,

Try:

Please advise as to (what company/which client) I should make the invoice out to and to whose attention.


--lotus

[Swim4life]

Very helpful. Thanks Lotus.

[Swim4life]

Sorry to bother you guys again�

Can I say �Please advise who we should make our invoice out to, and to whose attention the invoice should be directed.�?

Thanks a million!