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stevenukd
Joined: 13 Nov 2005 Posts: 324
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Posted: Sun Aug 13, 2006 4:13 pm Post subject: MOTIVE POWER |
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Dear Teachers,
1. Come on man! Violence does not solve the matters / problems.
2. I often have the motive power to work better after I have finished a romantic movie / a romance.
3. I now feel very normal whenever I hear her going out with her new boyfriend.
- Are these natural?
Thanks a lot to Teachers,
Stevenukd |
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CP
Joined: 12 Jun 2006 Posts: 2875 Location: California
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Posted: Sun Aug 13, 2006 5:11 pm Post subject: |
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I would edit these to make them more natural:
1. Come on, man! Violence doesn't solve anything.
2. I often have the inspiration to work better after I have seen a romantic movie.
3. I'm fine now when I hear that she's going out with her new boyfriend. _________________ You live a new life for every new language you speak. -Czech proverb |
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