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Junkomama
Joined: 17 Oct 2005 Posts: 592
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Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2006 10:32 pm Post subject: would have learned/ have it stay in my head |
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Hello, teachers.
Is the following sentence acceptable?
"Even if I took an intensive course of English and study for eight hours a day, I would'nt be able to memorize everything I would have learned. I think learning a foreign language and having it stay in my head requires continual study at least for a year. "
Thank you in advance!
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Anuradha Chepur
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Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2006 11:30 pm Post subject: |
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A few changes:
"Even if I took an intensive course in English and studied for eight hours a day, I would'nt be able to memorize everything I learned. I think learning a foreign language and having it stay in my head requires continual study for at least a year. " |
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Junkomama
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Posted: Wed Aug 16, 2006 4:54 am Post subject: |
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Thank you very much for your correcting my sentence!
Regards,
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